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Liquid Nature

Stream Spring strings Pure pearl plops Drops from droplets Frost-filled flimsy flakes Foaming, frothing, fizzing Free flawless faithful flowing Filling pits and ruts and trenches Plummeting into coarse craggy cracks Mingles with mighty waters of wide seas... Do divine waters leave the streams alone? Droplets to die down in Hades zone? gorgeously glamorous glow gone? Nay, at the early next morn Gloomy cloudy fogs torn Droopy drops airborne Toward skies drawn Move withdrawn Full blown Rain 19 February 2022 E Forms- Etheree - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/23/2022 5:47:00 AM

Stupefying use of words to create a beautiful poem, Christuraj:)

Valsa George

Date: 2/20/2022 4:09:00 AM

Lovely choice of words....Chris. Streams flowing down to merge with the ocean and then rising high as vapor to fall down as rain to continue the cycle

Debra L Brown

Date: 2/19/2022 10:34:00 AM

Christuraj, I loved the vision you created, enjoyed. Blessings ~ Debra

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/20/2022 12:17:00 AM

Thank you very much.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/19/2022 7:53:00 AM

Gorgeous Christuraj! I know many such streams here in Minnesota, flowing into the Mississippi in the South & Lk Superior in the North, just as you describe! in the North those streams are 'root beer' colored, very cool!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 2/19/2022 8:06:00 AM

Thank you very much.