Liquid Nature

Stream
Spring strings 
Pure pearl plops
Drops from droplets
Frost-filled flimsy flakes
Foaming, frothing, fizzing
Free flawless faithful flowing
Filling pits and ruts and trenches
Plummeting into coarse craggy cracks
Mingles with mighty waters of wide seas...

Do divine waters leave the streams alone?
Droplets to die down in Hades zone?
gorgeously glamorous glow gone?
Nay, at the early next morn
Gloomy cloudy fogs torn
Droopy drops airborne
Toward skies drawn
Move withdrawn
Full blown
Rain




19 February 2022 
E Forms- Etheree - Poetry Contest
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Daniel Avatar
February 23, 2022 at 5:47 AM
Stupefying use of words to create a beautiful poem, Christuraj:)
George Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 4:09 AM
Lovely choice of words....Chris. Streams flowing down to merge with the ocean and then rising high as vapor to fall down as rain to continue the cycle
Brown Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 10:34 AM
Christuraj, I loved the vision you created, enjoyed. Blessings ~ Debra
Alex Avatar
February 20, 2022 at 12:17 AM
Thank you very much.
Goff Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 7:53 AM
Gorgeous Christuraj! I know many such streams here in Minnesota, flowing into the Mississippi in the South & Lk Superior in the North, just as you describe! in the North those streams are 'root beer' colored, very cool!
Alex Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 8:06 AM
Thank you very much.
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