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Liquid Melody

Somewhere - - in the city of the clouds, the rain quietly ponders, and each liquid melody patiently waits; to absorb the warmth of my being - let the silky touch of the sky hold me - I softly whisper, in-between breaths . . I shall not be moved ------------------------ ~ something inspiring and romantic ~

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Joseph May

Date: 11/16/2023 5:16:00 AM

"in the city of the clouds, the rain quietly ponders," Each raindrop a melody. Beautiful write Brandy, hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/16/2023 7:50:00 PM

So sweet of you to share your favorite line within. Thank you Joseph, for your lovely comment. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/3/2018 7:37:00 AM

Nature indeed seems to have its way with you...touching your heart!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/3/2018 11:14:00 AM

Thank you Kim. Inspiration truly is everywhere. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Fj Thomas

Date: 7/23/2018 6:58:00 AM

I love the title and the poem makes it that much better! Lovely Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/23/2018 10:29:00 AM

Thank you FJ. I enjoyed writing this inspiring, yet romantic little poem. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy

Sylvia Coulstock

Date: 7/17/2018 12:41:00 PM

You bring a smile to my face and a warmth to my heart Brandy,thank you.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/23/2018 10:27:00 AM

Thank you SYLVIA. Awe, such a sweet thing to say to me. Your kindness is appreciated. :) Brandy

Maria Williams

Date: 7/15/2018 6:35:00 AM

There's liquid gold in these beautiful words Brandy. Wonderful ...Maria hugs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/15/2018 7:57:00 AM

The rain holds many amazing moments indeed. Creating a wonderful mood. Thank you Maria. Your kind words are appreciated. :) Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/14/2018 10:13:00 AM

Art drawn with words...an imaginative write...Splendid... All the best Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/14/2018 1:33:00 PM

Thank you Arturo. The rain truly inspires me. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy

Tim Smith

Date: 7/14/2018 8:55:00 AM

- let the silky touch of the sky hold me - I softly whisper, in-between breaths . . I shall not be moved... serenity right there

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/14/2018 1:31:00 PM

There is something magical about moments of the sky, its touch. Thank you Tim. I am happy that you enjoyed this. ~ Brandy

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/14/2018 5:21:00 AM

Brandy, I so wish this was true here. It has been drier than dry, and this lovely poem is a reminder that we are not getting ANY rain, but it would be terrific if we did. I can FEEL the rain in this poem.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/14/2018 7:59:00 AM

Awe, if I could send you some rain, I would. I am needing this light touch from the sky, as it is dry here as well. I capture each moment, when it does rain. Thank you Caren for your lovely comment. Maybe the rain will caress your part of the world and mine, very soon. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 7/13/2018 9:16:00 PM

The gentle rhythm of the rain, as it taps against my window pane, moves me...as does your poetry...

Brandy Nicole
Date: 7/13/2018 9:21:00 PM

Thank you John. Your thoughts are poetic. Many moments and emotions linger in the rain. I love everything about its caress. ~ Brandy