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Liquid Lullaby

Soothing is your song
as your crystal melody
plays within my heart




Inspired bt Raul Morenos' Rhythm of the Falls contest

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Skat A

May 12, 2015 at 1:29 PM

ROBIN, LOVE THE WAY YOU DRESSED NATURE...... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

September 11, 2013 at 9:57 PM

this is awesome... xox..Linda

Raul Moreno

September 12, 2011 at 8:53 AM

Miss your work, hope all is okay.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

November 1, 2010 at 9:23 PM

A Superb Haiku, the "crystal melody "Prisms" the body of your Haiku Awesome!! YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG (Harry)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

November 4, 2009 at 9:30 PM

Such a beautiful haiku :) different approach to the challenge--congrats on your win :)

Sara Kendrick

October 30, 2009 at 4:38 PM

Interesting Haiku. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sara

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

October 24, 2009 at 7:18 PM

Dear Robin, Congratulations on your place in Raul's contest A well deserved Win Your POETIC Creativity shines throughout Superb ALWAYS...HG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

October 23, 2009 at 4:32 AM

Congratulations, Robin on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Brandee Augustus

October 19, 2009 at 12:28 PM

When I saw the title of your poem knowing what contest it was for, I had to read it. This was brilliant and lovely and certainly did not disappoint. This is pretty close to perfect in my opinion. Congratulations on your well deserved placement in this contest!

Marty Owens

October 19, 2009 at 9:21 AM

This is so nice..Congratulations on the win. Marty

Adell Foster

October 18, 2009 at 8:31 PM

Congrats on your win in Raul's contest Robin this a very lovely write. Much continued sucess in writing, Always, Adell

Ismael Nieves

October 18, 2009 at 8:18 PM

CONGRATS! on your win. LOVE crystal melody! Beautifully written.

Debbie Guzzi

October 18, 2009 at 6:18 AM

lovely..just lovely..wet and warm. Light & Love

Brian Strand

October 17, 2009 at 2:21 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest Robin.Rgds Brian

Donna Golden

October 16, 2009 at 10:11 PM

Robin, this is gorgeous and brings a feeling of peace, tranquility, and beauty to my heart. Congrats on your high placing in the contest! Hugs, Donna

Elaine George

October 16, 2009 at 7:50 PM

Dear Robin, As I said before - this is a BEAUTIFUL Haiku. congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, lainie

Debbie Guzzi

October 16, 2009 at 5:35 PM

I love this! You go gal! Light & Love

Carrie Richards

October 16, 2009 at 4:28 PM

This was such a stunning depiction of Raul's contest picture! Lovely winning poem! ~Congratulations Robin! Love, Carrie

James Fraser

October 16, 2009 at 3:57 PM

Congratulations Robin, it was a winner in my eyes >> and it's kindly going to my favs >> James

Trudy Diane Rider

October 16, 2009 at 3:36 PM

Congratulations Robin! ~Trudy~

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 16, 2009 at 3:34 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Robin. Love, Carol

James Fraser

October 16, 2009 at 3:11 PM

Serene sounds of the Rhythm of the Falls, echo through the forests green canopied walls. Delightful in flow like Robin's pen, where the Rhythm of the Falls will flow time and time again. Inspired me to write " Waters Fall Under Gravity Feed " <> This is quite beautiful Robin - it has to be up there in the winners enclosure >> James,x