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Liquid Lullaby

Soothing is your song
as your crystal melody
plays within my heart




Inspired bt Raul Morenos' Rhythm of the Falls contest

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Skat A

Date: 5/12/2015 1:29:00 PM

ROBIN, LOVE THE WAY YOU DRESSED NATURE...... ENJOYED THE HAIKU, love SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/11/2013 9:57:00 PM

this is awesome... xox..Linda

Raul Moreno

Date: 9/12/2011 8:53:00 AM

Miss your work, hope all is okay.

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 11/1/2010 9:23:00 PM

A Superb Haiku, the "crystal melody "Prisms" the body of your Haiku Awesome!! YOUR Liege ALWAYS...HG (Harry)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/4/2009 9:30:00 PM

Such a beautiful haiku :) different approach to the challenge--congrats on your win :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/30/2009 4:38:00 PM

Interesting Haiku. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sara

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 10/24/2009 7:18:00 PM

Dear Robin, Congratulations on your place in Raul's contest A well deserved Win Your POETIC Creativity shines throughout Superb ALWAYS...HG

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 10/23/2009 4:32:00 AM

Congratulations, Robin on placing Raul’s picture inspired contest with this wonderful haiku. It amazed me at how many great and different haiku were inspired by such a lovely picture. Creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Brandee Augustus

Date: 10/19/2009 12:28:00 PM

When I saw the title of your poem knowing what contest it was for, I had to read it. This was brilliant and lovely and certainly did not disappoint. This is pretty close to perfect in my opinion. Congratulations on your well deserved placement in this contest!

Marty Owens

Date: 10/19/2009 9:21:00 AM

This is so nice..Congratulations on the win. Marty

Adell Foster

Date: 10/18/2009 8:31:00 PM

Congrats on your win in Raul's contest Robin this a very lovely write. Much continued sucess in writing, Always, Adell

Ismael Nieves

Date: 10/18/2009 8:18:00 PM

CONGRATS! on your win. LOVE crystal melody! Beautifully written.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/18/2009 6:18:00 AM

lovely..just lovely..wet and warm. Light & Love

Brian Strand

Date: 10/17/2009 2:21:00 AM

Congrats on your success in the contest Robin.Rgds Brian

Donna Golden

Date: 10/16/2009 10:11:00 PM

Robin, this is gorgeous and brings a feeling of peace, tranquility, and beauty to my heart. Congrats on your high placing in the contest! Hugs, Donna

Elaine George

Date: 10/16/2009 7:50:00 PM

Dear Robin, As I said before - this is a BEAUTIFUL Haiku. congratulations on your well deserved win. Love, lainie

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/16/2009 5:35:00 PM

I love this! You go gal! Light & Love

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/16/2009 4:28:00 PM

This was such a stunning depiction of Raul's contest picture! Lovely winning poem! ~Congratulations Robin! Love, Carrie

James Fraser

Date: 10/16/2009 3:57:00 PM

Congratulations Robin, it was a winner in my eyes >> and it's kindly going to my favs >> James

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 10/16/2009 3:36:00 PM

Congratulations Robin! ~Trudy~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/16/2009 3:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Robin. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 10/16/2009 3:11:00 PM

Serene sounds of the Rhythm of the Falls, echo through the forests green canopied walls. Delightful in flow like Robin's pen, where the Rhythm of the Falls will flow time and time again. Inspired me to write " Waters Fall Under Gravity Feed " <> This is quite beautiful Robin - it has to be up there in the winners enclosure >> James,x

Raul Moreno

Date: 10/16/2009 2:35:00 PM

Robin, congratulations on your success in my contest...Raul

Elaine George

Date: 10/15/2009 8:39:00 AM

Beautiful! Robin. Best wishes in Raul's contest. Love, Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 10/15/2009 12:11:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Robin.Thank you for your welcome comments to day.Rgds Brian