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Liquid Choir

A babbling brook rolls, Trickling melodies descend: Streaming lullabies.

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Last Night On Earth

Date: 9/1/2009 1:54:00 PM

The eleven words you have chosen here evoke this scene so succinctly. My senses are tingling. Really impressive.

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 7/24/2009 12:12:00 PM

Gravitating.

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 7/22/2009 9:42:00 AM

When I was in my younger years, I was a choir member. The title caught my attention, read it, and woooow, excellent write. Ernilando

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 7/16/2009 11:30:00 PM

Dear Raul, The Title caught my eye my ears heard Natures Choir sing Awesome Write ALWAYS...HG

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 7/13/2009 4:43:00 PM

Very lovely feel to this poem! I love it! Laura :)

Jo Bien

Date: 7/12/2009 7:41:00 PM

:), I feel like I am there and it is peaceful!

Pawlu Pascarawlu

Date: 7/12/2009 7:17:00 PM

Great poem Raul, love the connection to music, well done.

Date: 7/12/2009 11:57:00 AM

Nice use of imagery for a peaceful feeling poem. Like the connection of sounds. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind words on my footle series. Karen

James Fraser

Date: 7/12/2009 11:56:00 AM

The delightful flow of trickling water, ever so soothing>>excellent>>James

James Peranteau

Date: 7/12/2009 11:34:00 AM

How much more can this haiku paint,..wonderful,..I'm there Raul !!!! james

Edward Orozco

Date: 7/12/2009 1:57:00 AM

Amazing piece master! - eduardo

Jayne Eggins

Date: 7/12/2009 12:54:00 AM

Beautiful ... Loved it Jayne x x

Jared Pickett

Date: 7/11/2009 10:20:00 PM

water has it's own melody, it's own song... Good write friend.....JP

Steve Meadows

Date: 7/11/2009 2:22:00 PM

i really like haiku. this is really good. check out some of my poems

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/11/2009 12:48:00 PM

I can heard your babbling brook. Great Haiku. It would be lullaby for me. Sara

Abe Lopez

Date: 7/11/2009 12:22:00 PM

Great job raul......the way you lay down the combination of words is incredible . James is correct. your work continues to inspire us to want to work..........What will be my next muse?...hmmmmmmmm.........keep laying the smaaaaack doooowwwwwnn!

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/11/2009 11:46:00 AM

Perhaps they are singing "Row, row, row your boat!! ":) Lovely poem!!

James Marshall Goff

Date: 7/11/2009 11:34:00 AM

maybe my favorite place in the world is a small Wisconsin trout-stream with brookies facing upstream in the gin-clear gurglin' brook!!! great tune!! Raul!! ...wrote my poem "bench in the woods" in just such a place! .... jim (you always give me the itch to write! you do! just like Brian!!) jimbo