Liquid Choir

The eleven words you have chosen here evoke this scene so succinctly. My senses are tingling. Really impressive.

Gravitating.

When I was in my younger years, I was a choir member. The title caught my attention, read it, and woooow, excellent write. Ernilando

Dear Raul, The Title caught my eye my ears heard Natures Choir sing Awesome Write ALWAYS...HG

Very lovely feel to this poem! I love it! Laura :)

:), I feel like I am there and it is peaceful!

Great poem Raul, love the connection to music, well done.

Nice use of imagery for a peaceful feeling poem. Like the connection of sounds. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind words on my footle series. Karen

The delightful flow of trickling water, ever so soothing>>excellent>>James

How much more can this haiku paint,..wonderful,..I'm there Raul !!!! james

Amazing piece master! - eduardo

Beautiful ... Loved it Jayne x x

water has it's own melody, it's own song... Good write friend.....JP

i really like haiku. this is really good. check out some of my poems

I can heard your babbling brook. Great Haiku. It would be lullaby for me. Sara

Great job raul......the way you lay down the combination of words is incredible . James is correct. your work continues to inspire us to want to work..........What will be my next muse?...hmmmmmmmm.........keep laying the smaaaaack doooowwwwwnn!

Perhaps they are singing "Row, row, row your boat!! ":) Lovely poem!!

maybe my favorite place in the world is a small Wisconsin trout-stream with brookies facing upstream in the gin-clear gurglin' brook!!! great tune!! Raul!! ...wrote my poem "bench in the woods" in just such a place! .... jim (you always give me the itch to write! you do! just like Brian!!) jimbo