Lipstick Traces

Someone playing a concrete violin
with a jackhammer
on a midnight sidewalk,
street lights gawk,
flickering fascination,
tuning keys locked,
rosin swipes declined

chalks marks hold hop scotch trinkets
tossed into the numbered squares,
pawned now for a glass of chardonnay
and a plate of cheese

Paneled walls ache
of yesterday’s smoke rings,
scentless air fresheners,
hanging Christmas trees
presumed innocent,
only here for the music
and rear view mirrors

cherry lipstick traces on a folded napkin
crimson half circles
prints on either side
someone will be kissed tonight

I’ll take it with me
I love the flavor
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 9, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Metaphorical madness, you had me at "concrete violin with a jackhammer". Holy smokes! I never had a guilty Christmas tree that I know of. :)
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November 9, 2016 at 8:58 AM
There's always a first time. :) Thanks so much my friend. I think I got a little carried away with this one.
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November 7, 2016 at 4:56 PM
Now don't tell me you're gonna write about a kiss under the mistle-toe next because I always write one about that for Christmas .:D. :) A beautiful poem that makes me see that lipstick on a napkin..And those chalk marks and hopskotch trinkets..I see those too..Lovely indeed.
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November 7, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Indeed its my pleasure if you write about the mistle-toe..I was just kidding..So go ahead :) ..
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November 7, 2016 at 5:01 PM
Ok, I will leave the mistletoe kiss poem to you, not because you always write one but because I adore your poetry and can't wait now for Christmas to come. :) Thanks Charmaine, truly your kindness makes me smile.
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November 7, 2016 at 2:13 PM
This has sweet images in it with longing and appreciation as well. Well done Chris :)
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November 7, 2016 at 2:40 PM
Thanks Heidi. I am glad you liked this one.
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November 7, 2016 at 11:25 AM
delightful and quizzical, chris... love the flow; get the girl!..huggs
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November 7, 2016 at 2:39 PM
Thank you Nette. I am happy you enjoyed this one
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November 7, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Some great images Chris. Hope it is you she is going to kiss.
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November 7, 2016 at 10:37 AM
Thanks Tim, just trying to express some abstract thoughts.
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