lips red with raspberries

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Written, March 29, 2024

Poetry/Free Verse/lips red with raspberries
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1632-848-29
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

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silently, I walk a sun blown field my childhood lips red with raspberries that grow wild behind our home my fingers stained with the sweet juice I hear my own childhood laughter floating echoing in my dream . . . until it fades

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Zyrool Gifford

Date: 4/1/2024 12:35:00 PM

I can see it as I read the words, Constance, nicely painted.

Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2024 1:32:00 PM

Zyrool, thank you for the comment and compliment, hugs

Silent One

Date: 3/30/2024 6:43:00 AM

A lovely poem dear Constance..

Constance La France
Date: 3/30/2024 5:37:00 PM

Silent, thank you for the compliment, hugs, Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 3/29/2024 10:05:00 PM

Love the imagery and the feel of this nostalgic poem. Happy Easter :)

Constance La France
Date: 3/30/2024 5:38:00 PM

Eve, thank you for the compliment, and comment, hugs, Constance

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 3/29/2024 4:24:00 PM

I do like the delicate, nostalgic nature of your poem. I especially liked "I hear my own childhood laughter floating..." Those words created the perfect image. Best wishes with the contest. PS I enjoy your poetic style and voice, hugs, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 3/29/2024 4:32:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the compliment on my poem and writing style, and for the comment and encouragement, hugs, Constance