Lion

Lingers, eyeing victims
Locates the easy hunt
Lurks behind plants and trees
Lively stalks the loser
Launches brutal attack 
Leisurely relishes 
Leaves mission accomplished


14 March 2022 
In Search Of Prey Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Joseph May
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Emate Avatar
April 2, 2022 at 1:01 AM
"Leaves mission accomplished". Congratulations on your win. A well-written poem.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 1, 2022 at 10:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful "Lion" write. Have a blessed day/weekend.............
Peck Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 6:31 PM
Great Pleides, Joseph! I like your line Locates the easy hunt. I've read that the lion, while fierce, enjoys lazing. Congratulations on win!
Peck Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 6:26 PM
Great Pleides, Joseph! I like your line Locates the easy hunt. I've always read that the male lion is pretty lazy. Congratulations!
Miller Avatar
March 31, 2022 at 3:16 AM
Congratulations, a well-written descriptive poem.
George Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 9:23 PM
Beautifully done Chris ! Lions launch brutal attacks. Once the mission is accomplished, they leave for rest ! Congratulations on your win !
Roper Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 8:52 PM
Great description, Christuraj, congratulations on your win in Joseph contest. blessings my friend
Poet Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 6:09 PM
Very nicely crafted, Alex. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. Kindest regards dear friend.
Alex Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 7:17 PM
Thank you very much.
Dietrich Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 2:57 PM
I agree with Joseph, you penned this very nicely. Congrats on your win.
Alex Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 7:17 PM
Thank you very much.
May Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 2:15 PM
Very nicely penned Alex, Congrats on your win
Alex Avatar
March 30, 2022 at 7:17 PM
Thank you very much.
Woodrow Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 12:27 PM
Good one! :)
Alex Avatar
March 15, 2022 at 12:40 AM
Thank you very much.
Daniel Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 6:45 AM
Nicely penned, Christuraj:)
Alex Avatar
March 14, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Thank you very much.
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