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Linked Forever

Forever linked, a gift, a diamond, each other’s Valentine chosen. He vows that she is love and love is an eternal link that should never be broken. She vows, to-morrow is Saint Valentine’s Day, and I a maid at your window, to be your Valentine. Physically joined, now a sweet memory to be cherished. A gift to one another, a diamond in time, linked like the nascent Scottish tongue, from auld lang syne.

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Date: 5/28/2023 7:49:00 PM
A lovely and meaningful poem on the exchange of diamonds at the time of marital vows as a symbol of unbreakable love. All the Best in the contest Anaya !
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/30/2023 12:12:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa!
Date: 5/27/2023 10:04:00 PM
True friends are like diamonds, they last forever, got back yesterday, I told Anne-Lise you said hello, it was great to meet her. Tom
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/30/2023 12:13:00 PM
I recall the wonderful pictures you showed us of the ancient ruins.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 5/28/2023 10:00:00 AM
Greek Islands again
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/28/2023 9:03:00 AM
Linked forever in time, Tom. Where to next?
Date: 5/27/2023 7:24:00 PM
your diamond shines brightly so does your poem Anaya, winning wished :)
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/27/2023 7:32:00 PM
Thank you, Mystic Rose! I do like my poem as I followed rules. Your comment makes it so much better, knowing I touched you, even if I don't make the list! xhugsx
Date: 5/27/2023 2:38:00 PM
- "A gift to one another, a diamond ... " ... beautiful - Best wishes in the contest, Anaya :) - hugs
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/27/2023 7:29:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! A diamond is forever, and friendship can be as well! xhugsx
Date: 5/27/2023 12:00:00 AM
Loved how you ended the poem. May your love be forever.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/27/2023 10:49:00 AM
Thank you, Victor! I left reply on Charmaine Chircop, she is amazing! I read so much of her poetry -because of your poem which lead me to her ;D (I find your poetry's similar)
Date: 5/26/2023 10:31:00 PM
Beautiful poem of love Anaya! Debx
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/27/2023 9:31:00 AM
Thank you, Deb! Glad your back xhugsx

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