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Lingers-edited in the morn

it’s past sleep the presence of quietness lingers dark cheeks against the window pane but there’s light on my side of the street Christmas lingers like electricity surging through wires and the switch won’t be turned off quite yet my tree stands tall in its present darkness because it’s past sleep but my mind lingers over this poem that I must complete before I climb under warm sheets and I switch to dreams of proverbial sugar plums no crumbs left for the eve of a new year but that is a story for the morrow no longer will I linger it’s quite late I’m off to bed ready set snooze and I linger til ten o’clock as a bright then brighter light lingers

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Date: 1/3/2025 5:17:00 PM
Whoah, Kim - this is simply breathtaking..."there's light on my side of the street" - ....what a metaphor that's so simple it's overlooked, and you embraced it with power in you, wonderful work
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/3/2025 6:38:00 PM
Thank you so much! I always appreciate the encouragement!
Date: 12/31/2024 9:35:00 AM
I have never considered what one does with a new poem. You seem to have returned to edit it. I have (though not always) left a poem and returned to it after a day or two to edit it. Still, your poem is finished; you can now get under warm covers and have a good night's sleep. Happy New Year.
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