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Lingering Images - Collaboration With Chris Green

You took me apart All that remained Were folds of my heart Where I contained Memories lasting Pieces of dreams Shadows recasting Torn at the seams Your whispering words To both my lost ears Are bright coloured birds Chirping my fears Of summers forsaken Eroding the sand Illusions mistaken I can’t understand Between our stretched fingers Our love whispers still All Images linger Forever they will For of this emotion Regardless the view My endless devotion Will always be you *** May 19, 2017 Copyright © Chris Green and Darren White

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/6/2017 1:40:00 AM

Nicely done to both of you....

Darren White
Date: 7/12/2017 12:09:00 PM

Pashang, thank you so very much :)

Maria Williams

Date: 7/6/2017 12:40:00 AM

Love and Love this gem. Two brilliant poets coming together once again to create a masterpiece. Darren and Chris this is a fave...Maria

Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 12:42:00 AM

Thank you Maria :)

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/4/2017 10:38:00 PM

Very, very beautiful ... wonderful collab. Thanks for sharing!

Darren White
Date: 7/5/2017 2:26:00 AM

Thanks my friend :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/4/2017 6:56:00 PM

A masterful collaboration my friends...god bless...^WW^

Darren White
Date: 7/5/2017 2:26:00 AM

WW, thank you :)

Edward Mccall

Date: 7/4/2017 10:50:00 AM

What a beautiful collaboration you to write so well together I enjoyed this poem very much.

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 11:46:00 AM

We do enjoy writing together :) Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2017 12:13:00 AM

you guys are both so talented. How could this not be beautiful! wonderful, Darren.Will have to go see if chris has it up as well.

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 1:51:00 AM

Thanks Andrea. No, our collaborations are on my page only :)

Joseph May

Date: 7/3/2017 10:46:00 PM

Beautiful collaboration you guys...I especially liked the 4th stanza

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 1:51:00 AM

It is a beautiful stanza, I agree (it's Chris') :)

Sara Ella

Date: 7/3/2017 10:19:00 PM

This is a wonderful poem to read aloud <3 You both create so well together - it is always fun to see each collaboration :)

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 1:50:00 AM

We both LOVE working together

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/3/2017 8:42:00 PM

Both of you did very well with this! Very powerful emotion in this. I feel that many can relate to also. Very well done :)

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 1:49:00 AM

Thanks Heidi, it is relatable, isn't it?

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/3/2017 5:50:00 PM

Beautiful imagery indeed, I envisioned many a tale buried inside of this poem.

Darren White
Date: 7/4/2017 1:49:00 AM

Thanks my friend, many tales indeed.

Dean Wood

Date: 7/3/2017 1:28:00 PM

Oh, nicely done gentlemen! Beautiful imagery. "Shadows recasting" and "All images linger// Forever they will" are both nice phrases. A great collaborative effort. Great poem! Dean

Darren White
Date: 7/3/2017 1:32:00 PM

Thank you Dean! Love this poem, it sings :)