Notes About The Poem

Based on a joke my daughter sent me:

Lingerie Labyrinth

You might trip if caught in a flap
Or with your foot stuck in a strap
When flooring's criss-crossed
With bras she has tossed
You will need a booby-trap map
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 1:10 PM
oh wow, this one is hilarious. A fave!
Jones Avatar
March 11, 2024 at 9:13 PM
It’s amazing how many of these you can write! A real talent you have!
Beaufort Avatar
March 12, 2024 at 10:43 AM
Karen, you are very kind to notice. There's something I really like about this form as you might notice. It fits my personality, so I feel very lucky!
Poet Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 7:19 AM
Navigating through a room filled with bras that have been thrown around, is not an easy feat...humorous and slightly chaotic image.
Beaufort Avatar
March 8, 2024 at 12:19 PM
SP, We hope we don't have too much exposure to this kind of chaos. but we know there are people who just can't seem to put their clothing in a drawer.
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