Lingerie Labyrinth

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Based on a joke my daughter sent me:

You might trip if caught in a flap Or with your foot stuck in a strap When flooring's criss-crossed With bras she has tossed You will need a booby-trap map

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/19/2024 1:10:00 PM

oh wow, this one is hilarious. A fave!

Karen Jones

Date: 3/11/2024 9:13:00 PM

It’s amazing how many of these you can write! A real talent you have!

Duke Beaufort
Date: 3/12/2024 10:43:00 AM

Karen, you are very kind to notice. There's something I really like about this form as you might notice. It fits my personality, so I feel very lucky!

Sotto Poet

Date: 3/8/2024 7:19:00 AM

Navigating through a room filled with bras that have been thrown around, is not an easy feat...humorous and slightly chaotic image.

Duke Beaufort
Date: 3/8/2024 12:19:00 PM

SP, We hope we don't have too much exposure to this kind of chaos. but we know there are people who just can't seem to put their clothing in a drawer.