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Limerick - Twirly Girl

 
There once was a girl who got off the couch, she joined a dance class cause she was no slouch; But- when others went this way, her feet were just stuck in clay; Spinning and grinning- she hit a wall - ouch ! ________________________________ March 22, 2016 Poetry/Limerick/twirly girl Copyright Protected, ID 16-770-938-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. For the contest, Lets Have Some Fun, sponsor, Casarah Nance Second Place
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Daniel Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 3:38 AM
Congratulations on your win:)
La France Avatar
March 26, 2016 at 1:09 PM
Jo, thanks for visiting with congratulations !
Barry Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 10:24 PM
Really fun. Can't wait to try one.
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Constance, I hope I have time to see all the winners on this great contest list. Glad to finally see yours. BIG congrats. it's a cute poem.
La France Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:10 PM
Andrea, thanks for visiting and for the congrats !
Kimathi Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 7:30 AM
Hi BW!!! Congrats for your top placement in the contest!!! ;-)
La France Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 8:51 AM
Teddy, thanks so much for the congrats !!
Gentry Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Congratulations on your win! I like your humor and am still smiling :)
La France Avatar
March 24, 2016 at 9:02 AM
Susan, thanks for the congratulations, thank goodness I am no longer spinning into walls !
Scars Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 5:36 PM
BW, congrats on your placement in the contest!-luloo :)
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 6:39 PM
Laura, thanks for the congrats !
Canerdy Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 5:17 PM
Congrats on placing in the contest! Janice
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 6:42 PM
Janice, thanks so much for the congrats !
Allison Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 4:32 PM
dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 4:46 PM
Jan, thanks so much for visiting with the congrats !
Smith Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations B/W, funny stuff...
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 5:02 PM
Charlie, thanks for visiting for the congratulations !
Nance Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 1:46 PM
I laughed out loud when I read this, thanks for that, it feels good to have some humor. hugs xx
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Casarah, thanks for the fun contest, and for my placement, so happy it made you smile ~
Allison Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 5:48 PM
great one Broken Wings good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 11:53 AM
Jan, thanks for visiting with the encouragement. Appreciate it.
Smith Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 5:25 PM
LOL... at least she was smiling the whole time.
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 1:15 PM
Tim, yep, spinning and smiling like a fool until the crash that is, thanks for visiting, appreciate !
Mcclain Avatar
March 22, 2016 at 4:54 PM
Hi Broken Wings! Ha-ha! Good one, very clever--GL in the contest! Cheers, Brian
La France Avatar
March 23, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Brain, thanks for visiting, happy you like this silly limerick ~
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