Limerick I

There was once a funny old-man,
Who wore for a hat, a flimsy pan,
Every Christmas he'd turn blue--
Out of cold, cough and flu--
And eat his beans from a can!




*My first attempt at a Limerick*
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Andresen Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 6:29 AM
I feel sorry for the funny old man.... Good Akash. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU! oxox hugs Anne-Lise
Fiery Avatar
January 1, 2012 at 12:52 AM
well ...u seriously did well Akash ! I liked this ..if this is first then I am sure u second will be '' no wrds in the dictionary to describe''...cheeers !
Dietrich Avatar
December 30, 2011 at 1:39 PM
Poor funny old man. Good rhyming, Akash!
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