Limerick Contest

Old Man Lee
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 There was an old fella named Lee
 Who was blind as a bat you see
 He stayed out late
 Brought home a date
 A lovely blond named Sheree

 The neighbors did show surprise
 That  he brought back such a prize
 Twas a little blue pill
 That gave him the thrills
 To the occasion he must rise

 4/27/17
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Martin Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 1:49 PM
Congratulations on your win Joseph and Lee's lucky night out! :-)
Dietrich Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 10:37 PM
Way to go with your win, Joseph. Congrats!
Roper Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 8:48 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your win ~*
Allison Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 3:34 PM
So so lovely to see your humourous side Joseph - a real winner in my book:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
May Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 9:25 PM
Thank you for my placement Jan...hugs
Ricci Avatar
May 23, 2017 at 7:41 AM
Good Morning Joseph. I've been trying to practice the Limerick thus I turned to this entry. You did marvelous. The flow tone voice and flair are all there and present. You delivered a playful theme for certain. Well done throughout. Enjoy the morning and day.
Downing  Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 10:53 PM
Oh how funny. Good luck in the e contest!
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 8:23 PM
very nicely done, especially the second one's final line!!
Roper Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 3:05 PM
Haha... Jan is going to love this one... ~*
Michaels Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 9:50 AM
This is great, Joseph! Very funny! Good luck with the contest! Regards, John.
Smith Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 12:23 PM
lol...blue took away the blu
Green Avatar
April 27, 2017 at 11:59 AM
This was funny Joseph. The picture you create with your words is hilarious. Best wishes in the contest
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