Limerick Bawdy

.   Boat-riding

                          Pretty pig and grey goat with white coat
                          came to river to float a small boat.
                              Also, boarded Master Mole.
                             At bottom mole made hole.
                        Boat sank. All rescued by swimmer colt.


                      
                      

   04/27/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Allison Avatar
June 20, 2017 at 5:17 PM
the rhyme was slightly off with colt coat and boat and syllable count slightly off int the first stanza. thanks for entering the contest Anisha and many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Wolf Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 1:30 AM
Did Master Mole make the hole? Haha! Limericks are fun! Good luck in the contest, Anisha
Dutta Avatar
April 28, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Great comment. Using your idea in the poem. Thanks.
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