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Limerick Bawdy

. Boat-riding Pretty pig and grey goat with white coat came to river to float a small boat. Also, boarded Master Mole. At bottom mole made hole. Boat sank. All rescued by swimmer colt. 04/27/17

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/20/2017 5:17:00 PM

the rhyme was slightly off with colt coat and boat and syllable count slightly off int the first stanza. thanks for entering the contest Anisha and many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

White Wolf

Date: 4/28/2017 1:30:00 AM

Did Master Mole make the hole? Haha! Limericks are fun! Good luck in the contest, Anisha

Anisha Dutta
Date: 4/28/2017 7:21:00 AM

Great comment. Using your idea in the poem. Thanks.