Limerick

Age forty -one this month is a chill

For brother who’s not over the hill

          So he won’t seem unfit

              Got a total face lift

Now he’s looking like a roasted grill


                                    
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Fictional dedication  to my older brother
The Perfect Limerick Contest of Andrea Dietrich

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Olusegun Arowolo

March 16, 2014 at 6:38 PM

Beautiful and lovely write...Congrats on your win...

Kash Poet

March 15, 2014 at 9:01 PM

Enjoyed the fun here Nette.Very nice Limerick.How are you?

Bl Devnath

March 15, 2014 at 12:24 PM

It's a wonderful fiction and nice dedication not only to your brother but to many. Good luck in the contest. Hugs.. and congrats on your win. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl

Tim Smith

March 14, 2014 at 8:08 PM

Congrats on the win nette...Hugs Tim

Joyce Johnson

March 14, 2014 at 6:52 PM

This was fun, Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Darren Watson

March 14, 2014 at 3:35 PM

You are far too good at this nette . I was going to create a competition about an amorous bat but you would just hang upside down and waltz through it , lol Great limerick my friend.

Skat A

March 14, 2014 at 12:45 PM

nice one Nette, Congratulations, enjoying the win. *SKAT

Robert Johnson

March 14, 2014 at 12:20 PM

Makes one think twice, uh, three times about plastic surgery. Forty can be tough. :) Congrats on contest. Peace. :)

Roger Horsch

March 14, 2014 at 10:21 AM

Hi Nette, Congrats on your win. I loved it.......Roger

Dr.Ram Mehta

March 14, 2014 at 5:27 AM

Congratulations on the fine win in Limerick contest. Lovely humor, nette

Andrea Dietrich

March 14, 2014 at 2:19 AM

Loved the humor of this one, Nette. congratulations!

Russell Sivey

March 13, 2014 at 10:56 PM

Ha Ha lol, this is a tremendous Limerick, I I'm laughing a lot as I read and re-read this clever write! I can see you like to pick on your brother lovingly, I do the same with my brother whenever he's around! It is only for fun, just like this poem does to your brother...I hope you share it with him my friend! I surely loved reading this excellent piece here this evening! What a hilarious poem, Great work!!

Frederic Parker

March 13, 2014 at 6:32 PM

I'd like to think 41 is old but I'm 22 years older I'm told ....good luck in the contest

Tim Smith

March 13, 2014 at 5:19 PM

This one is funny nette....I love these.....Tim

Debbie Guzzi

March 13, 2014 at 4:46 PM

Good luck hon! Nice to have a brother who actually interacts with you! Light & Love

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 13, 2014 at 12:58 PM

- Now I understand ..... it's a limerick contest ... that is why there are so many funny limerick posted the last few days .... I love this Nette - so fun to read :)) - Good luck contest!! - Have a nice day .... it's night at your place I think - evening here :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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