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Age forty -one this month is a chill

For brother who’s not over the hill

          So he won’t seem unfit

              Got a total face lift

Now he’s looking like a roasted grill


                                    
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Fictional dedication  to my older brother
The Perfect Limerick Contest of Andrea Dietrich

Copyright © Nette Onclaud | Year Posted 2014

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Olusegun Arowolo Date: 3/16/2014 6:38:00 PM Beautiful and lovely write...Congrats on your win... Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 3/15/2014 9:01:00 PM Enjoyed the fun here Nette.Very nice Limerick.How are you? Login to Reply

Bl Devnath Date: 3/15/2014 12:24:00 PM It's a wonderful fiction and nice dedication not only to your brother but to many. Good luck in the contest. Hugs.. and congrats on your win. Loved always, my lovely friend, bl Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 3/14/2014 8:08:00 PM Congrats on the win nette...Hugs Tim Login to Reply

Joyce Johnson Date: 3/14/2014 6:52:00 PM This was fun, Nette. Congratulations. Love, Joyce Login to Reply

Darren Watson Date: 3/14/2014 3:35:00 PM You are far too good at this nette . I was going to create a competition about an amorous bat but you would just hang upside down and waltz through it , lol Great limerick my friend. Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 3/14/2014 12:45:00 PM nice one Nette, Congratulations, enjoying the win. *SKAT Login to Reply

Robert Johnson Date: 3/14/2014 12:20:00 PM Makes one think twice, uh, three times about plastic surgery. Forty can be tough. :) Congrats on contest. Peace. :) Login to Reply

Roger Horsch Date: 3/14/2014 10:21:00 AM Hi Nette, Congrats on your win. I loved it.......Roger Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 3/14/2014 5:27:00 AM Congratulations on the fine win in Limerick contest. Lovely humor, nette Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/14/2014 2:19:00 AM Loved the humor of this one, Nette. congratulations! Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 3/13/2014 10:56:00 PM Ha Ha lol, this is a tremendous Limerick, I I'm laughing a lot as I read and re-read this clever write! I can see you like to pick on your brother lovingly, I do the same with my brother whenever he's around! It is only for fun, just like this poem does to your brother...I hope you share it with him my friend! I surely loved reading this excellent piece here this evening! What a hilarious poem, Great work!! Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 3/13/2014 6:32:00 PM I'd like to think 41 is old but I'm 22 years older I'm told ....good luck in the contest Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 3/13/2014 5:19:00 PM This one is funny nette....I love these.....Tim Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/13/2014 4:46:00 PM Good luck hon! Nice to have a brother who actually interacts with you! Light & Love Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/13/2014 12:58:00 PM - Now I understand ..... it's a limerick contest ... that is why there are so many funny limerick posted the last few days .... I love this Nette - so fun to read :)) - Good luck contest!! - Have a nice day .... it's night at your place I think - evening here :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply