Limerick 3

A very beautiful young  lady named Jan 
Explained the things she does for her man
I cannot believe what she said 
The vision won't leave my head 
If she wants to do it to me *She can.

A tribute to a dear friend .lol

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/7/2014 6:23:00 AM
lol,be careful of your plan,,,remember she has a man,,,lol,,,love it Darren
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/7/2014 3:14:00 PM
I do answer back be careful Mr Watson I have my eye on you! Hugs Jan xx
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Darren Watson
Date: 5/7/2014 7:33:00 AM
She loves her man dearly , Besides she's far too much woman for me , Answers back and everything , lol
Date: 5/6/2014 1:39:00 PM
lol, darren.. jan ain;t easy so be ready to be clobbered... nice one.. huggs
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Darren Watson
Date: 5/7/2014 7:36:00 AM
She has an amazing sense of humour nette but I promise I don't give if I'm not prepared to receive . Jan can dish it out too , I know that.
Date: 4/30/2014 7:19:00 PM
thanks for popping in to say hello and KEEP up with poems!!!
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Date: 4/29/2014 6:26:00 PM
hahaha love the playfulness and very witty. awesome tribute! lol
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Date: 4/25/2014 8:50:00 PM
Ha Ha ! Very witty and funny :)
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Date: 4/19/2014 9:48:00 PM
hahaha. GOOD one, Darren, and btw, where the heck ARE you???
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/20/2014 11:37:00 AM
Hes a bit tied up at the moment Andrea - not by me I hasten to add! Should be back on in a few days Jan x
Date: 4/18/2014 11:38:00 PM
A wonderful humorous piece that brought a big smile to my face Darren. Aloha
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Jan Allison
Date: 5/5/2014 4:52:00 PM
It bought a blush to mine.... but I will get my revenge one day .... Mr Watson you have been warned! Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/16/2014 2:11:00 AM
Lol sensational poem;) . Enjoyd readin it. The rhymin great too. Ah yes nice to read u again.
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Date: 4/15/2014 3:20:00 PM
Lol....Nice Darren
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Date: 4/15/2014 12:43:00 AM
OH MY OH ME....OH DEAR...OH DEAR...You two are sizzling HOT HOT HOT!!! ;) Hmmmmmmmmmm....."friend" eh???? ;)
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Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2014 12:35:00 PM
Yes Friend! I was stunned when Darren mailed me to say he'd written me a short poem - so glad I was sitting down when I read it. Hugs Jan xx
Date: 4/14/2014 11:42:00 PM
Mr Watson! You have me sooooo wrong and as for 'young and beautiful' you are soooo wrong lol. Hugs and blushes Jan x
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