Limerick 3

A very beautiful young  lady named Jan 
Explained the things she does for her man
I cannot believe what she said 
The vision won't leave my head 
If she wants to do it to me *She can.

A tribute to a dear friend .lol
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Palmer Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 6:23 AM
lol,be careful of your plan,,,remember she has a man,,,lol,,,love it Darren
Allison Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 3:14 PM
I do answer back be careful Mr Watson I have my eye on you! Hugs Jan xx
Watson Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 7:33 AM
She loves her man dearly , Besides she's far too much woman for me , Answers back and everything , lol
Onclaud Avatar
May 6, 2014 at 1:39 PM
lol, darren.. jan ain;t easy so be ready to be clobbered... nice one.. huggs
Watson Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 7:36 AM
She has an amazing sense of humour nette but I promise I don't give if I'm not prepared to receive . Jan can dish it out too , I know that.
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2014 at 7:19 PM
thanks for popping in to say hello and KEEP up with poems!!!
Price Avatar
April 29, 2014 at 6:26 PM
hahaha love the playfulness and very witty. awesome tribute! lol
Anglesey Avatar
April 25, 2014 at 8:50 PM
Ha Ha ! Very witty and funny :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 19, 2014 at 9:48 PM
hahaha. GOOD one, Darren, and btw, where the heck ARE you???
Allison Avatar
April 20, 2014 at 11:37 AM
Hes a bit tied up at the moment Andrea - not by me I hasten to add! Should be back on in a few days Jan x
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 18, 2014 at 11:38 PM
A wonderful humorous piece that brought a big smile to my face Darren. Aloha
Allison Avatar
May 5, 2014 at 4:52 PM
It bought a blush to mine.... but I will get my revenge one day .... Mr Watson you have been warned! Hugs Jan xx
Kamoonpuri Avatar
April 16, 2014 at 2:11 AM
Lol sensational poem;) . Enjoyd readin it. The rhymin great too. Ah yes nice to read u again.
Smith Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 3:20 PM
Lol....Nice Darren
Manassian Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 12:43 AM
OH MY OH ME....OH DEAR...OH DEAR...You two are sizzling HOT HOT HOT!!! ;) Hmmmmmmmmmm....."friend" eh???? ;)
Allison Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 12:35 PM
Yes Friend! I was stunned when Darren mailed me to say he'd written me a short poem - so glad I was sitting down when I read it. Hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
April 14, 2014 at 11:42 PM
Mr Watson! You have me sooooo wrong and as for 'young and beautiful' you are soooo wrong lol. Hugs and blushes Jan x
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