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There came a dark rain from above With sorrow we released all our doves They flew up through the night Some plummeted with fright One returned framed by God's Glorious Love 4/17/20

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Date: 1/4/2022 3:36:00 PM
James, Endearing thought. Like the use of the limerick form for this purpose.
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 1/4/2022 8:12:00 PM
Thanks Gail!
Date: 11/26/2021 7:03:00 PM
A limerick with a warm touch of feeling unlike the ordinary type. 'One returned framed by God's glorious love'.... an uplifting thought, James ! Love it !
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 1/4/2022 8:12:00 PM
Thank you Valsa!
Date: 8/31/2021 12:59:00 AM
Humerous,witty Jimbo & sound teaching to boot
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 8/31/2021 6:39:00 AM
Exactly! Thanks Brian!
Date: 3/18/2021 9:27:00 AM
Yes, He did return and will return again. Sara
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 3/18/2021 12:19:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Sara!
Date: 9/23/2020 1:10:00 PM
"One returned framed by God's Glorious Love" Such a beautiful thought. At least one wasn't afraid. Doves are graceful. Your thoughts are uplifting. ~ Brandy
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 9/23/2020 1:23:00 PM
Thanks once more for stopping by, Brandy!
Date: 6/28/2020 2:45:00 PM
This is beautiful. (and not just because I fancy doves) xomo
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 6/28/2020 5:50:00 PM
Thank you PT, am always praying for Divine Inspiration & the strength to fulfill God's Will, crosses paths with my poetry!
Date: 4/18/2020 2:20:00 PM
a super uplifting limerick, just what we need at the moment:-) hugs Jan xx
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 4/18/2020 3:08:00 PM
Wow! Thanks for inspiring feedback Jan...jimbo
Date: 4/17/2020 10:15:00 PM
A gorgeous limerick!
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James Marshall Goff
Date: 4/18/2020 12:03:00 AM
Thanks so much Kim!

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