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Limbo

Six steeple towers, cold as steel, drab daggers in the sky! Their hallowed halls no longer call when breezes wander by – for, filled with dread to wake the dead, they've ceased to sough or sigh. Coiled candle sticks! Their twisted wicks no longer 'lume the cracks with dying flame, subdued and tame, mid pendant pearls of wax, since deference to innocence dissolved in molten tracks. Above! The dismal ditch of dusk reveals a velvet streak, through which the winter’s wicked winds will sometimes weave and sneak, and faraway a cable sways, a bridge clings hushed and bleak. Thin shadows shift, like silver shafts, across the cruel moraine reflecting white a wisp of light in ebon beads of bane which casts a crooked smile across a faceless window pane. Wan neon lights glow through the nights, through darkness sleek as slate, while lanterns (hovered, high above, in lurid swinging gait), haunt ballrooms, bars and bare bazaars, though no one's there to fete. The souls who come with jagged tongue won't sing a silent psalm, nor paint pale lips with languid quips to pierce the deathly calm, nor pray for mercy, grace deferred, nor beg lethean balm, nor yet redress the emptiness that shifting shades embalm – they've seen, you see, life’s brevity, and face it with aplomb.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/23/2016 7:25:00 AM
love it I wonder if this is what Limbo is
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Date: 5/18/2016 7:58:00 AM
Hi Terry. Congrats on your top placement with this awesome piece!! ;-)
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:14:00 AM
Terry, congratulations on your First Place win in the 'Any Poem Not For A Contest, Ever' contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/16/2016 9:10:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, Terry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/15/2016 8:07:00 PM
Great write and win Terry...Congrats
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Date: 5/15/2016 5:31:00 PM
You definitely have a silver tongue, nice flow to this unique write! Congrats on your placement
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Date: 4/29/2016 10:10:00 AM
Love the many uses of alliteration and assonance throughout this eerie and surreal description of a place that doesn't exist, though your poem could be describing certain cities on this earth. Great write. / M
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Date: 1/5/2016 5:19:00 AM
What a rich vocabulary you have, not to mention your imagination. I would say that was definitely LIMBO... such vibrant imagery and excellent alliterations, and the mono-rhyming in each verse was well noted by this reader. Well done Terry! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 7/11/2015 10:06:00 PM
Wow! Terry, this is a fantastic write! The flow and imagery are amazing! Very well done! Love, Kim
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 7/14/2015 4:14:00 PM
Thank you so much, Kim... As I said to Connie, I'm trying to get back into 'the groove'... your words help ...
Date: 7/11/2015 4:57:00 PM
Terry, this poem is so exquisite I hardly know where to begin extolling its virtues! Your words roll off the tongue with such lyrical magic that qualifies this poem as a Masterpiece! 7 I must Fave it!
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Terry O'Leary
Date: 7/14/2015 3:55:00 PM
Thank you so much, Connie... I'm trying to get back into 'the groove'... your word help ...

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