Limbo

lost in space standing at the crossroads between Heaven in that of hell i stand a lone fiddler from the dust of ashes one breathes a towering heart burning inferno which got burned scorched hell drawing magic in a memory bank now opening the curtains etched on chamber walls i play a sweet tune as the embers begin breathing drums begin beating like the phoenix a yearning inside one soul i arise from the ashes light of love sparkle and shine remaining in embers awaiting loves call

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Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 10/20/2013 5:41:00 AM

This is one of those magical writes my friend. Enjoyed the read as always

Shanity Rain

Date: 10/20/2013 1:08:00 AM

I love the flowing words and you write about souls as well ~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/19/2013 5:41:00 PM

very inspiring, liam.. i enjoyed the bright erergy of your work..:) huggs

Jack Ellison

Date: 10/19/2013 10:22:00 AM

Great poem Liam... nicely written! Have a wonderful day, my friend!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/19/2013 5:55:00 AM

Ahh!! Interesting concepts that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/18/2013 9:10:00 PM

what a beautiful poem flowing from your pen...love this one :)

Ken Carroll

Date: 10/18/2013 4:00:00 PM

Hey Liam Nicely penned yearning my friend.. Ken

Eileen Manassian

Date: 10/18/2013 1:21:00 PM

Liam....I JUST read this. How incredible...my latest sonnet has many of these same words...Isn't that something. We were on the same brain wave....Lovely, as usual...