Limbo

It all hangs in the balance Hovering in cobalt atmosphere On a cloud of chaos Diffused in the breeze Words left unspoken Gazes in the distance lost Never crossing paths Isolated bubbles Launched without a care Without a smile Submitted on May 1, 2019 for contest MAY 2019 PREMIER 1 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 2ND

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L. J. Carber

Date: 5/4/2019 7:27:00 AM

Congrats Line--- I've often been in that same limbo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/4/2019 10:18:00 AM

Glad we both found our way out. LOL

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/3/2019 2:51:00 PM

Emotions left in limbo are expressed exquisitely in your intimate and poignant poem. Congratulations, Line, for your excellent win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/3/2019 4:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Susan.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/2/2019 12:20:00 AM

This poem is so well written that it haunts me. I hate unfinished feelings, things unsaid, these are the words that I cannot forget and it is torture to me when there is no chance to resolve the matter. You have captured this perfectly. This feeling is as powerful as love or hate. WELL DONE! :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/3/2019 8:46:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely compliment, Timothy. Much appreciated.

Alkas Poetry

Date: 5/1/2019 12:38:00 PM

Dear Line... strange atmosphere when everything stands still, without solution. It seems that the world does not walk anymore , and so life. Solitude in the heart or solitude of a poet? I hope everything gets arranged and joy hits hard ... Beautiful poetic construction ... intimate moments, salute wv we alkas.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/1/2019 1:10:00 PM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Alkas.