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Limber Seniors

Yoga positions pretzel launching pad, painful crowd wilts from fitness senior endurance festiness charges living folks uncurl, relieved Senryu composed August 7/21

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Valsa George

Date: 1/12/2022 1:11:00 AM

This is so interesting ! You have blasted a myth that yoga is good for senior citizens. Pretzel positions are too much for their age and painful too. A wonderful senryu

Brian Sambourne
Date: 1/12/2022 5:28:00 AM

Hi Valsa. Thank you for your message + stop by.. The piece is a bit of tongue in cheek. It pokes some fun at senior fitness, which I still believe in + follow. Best wishes, Brian

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/19/2021 3:57:00 AM

Well, I don't know how old those seniors were but my husband and I got winded tossing a beach ball around to each other yesterday. LOL..I enjoyed reading your creative work. Sara

Brian Sambourne
Date: 12/19/2021 7:02:00 AM

I appreciate your drop by Sara + kind comments. Good to read that you + spouse are exercising. And so we push on, staying active. Be well. Brian

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/10/2021 7:20:00 PM

Ouch, that hurts, Love these Brian, guess i need to limber more.

Brian Sambourne
Date: 8/10/2021 9:14:00 PM

Thanks for the drop by, Harry, + your kind remark. Best wishes, Brian