Karen Jones Poet Rhyme

Lily pad of Love

My mind drifts back
To red times we've had
Healing happy lime laughs
Revealing shining over anything sad

Magical how one word from you
Colors me whatever you choose
From lamenting lemon to maroon
All based on love so true

You are my favorite song
I sing you all day night long
U write me pink passionate poems
Invite me to dream along

We don't have much in hand
But rich in heart with romance
By time design holding hand
Spirit so cheery we freelance

No bars no cars only white stars
Can showcase our love bizarre
We cruise like cotton clouds so vast
Upon our lovely lime lily pad

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Beryl Edmonds November 27, 2023 at 10:11 AM A lovely Lilly pad of Love poem Karen ~ Belle Karen Jones November 27, 2023 at 10:20 AM Thanks Beryl!

Sam Kauffman November 26, 2023 at 9:07 PM So beautiful with a rainbow of creative energy, Karen. I really enjoyed your original imagery and word use! Thank you for this delightfulness! Blessings! Karen Jones November 27, 2023 at 1:08 AM You are kind to comment Sam. Thank you hugs and blessings.

Daisy Meadows November 20, 2023 at 10:58 AM This is a beautiful poem! Enjoyed reading it. Well done. Karen Jones November 20, 2023 at 2:17 PM So glad you like it Jeanette. Thanks!

Susan Lawrence November 15, 2023 at 6:43 PM Magical and colorful in love and emotion dear Karen . Love the title as well . Susan :) Karen Jones November 15, 2023 at 6:48 PM So happy you even read it Susan! Thanks.

I Am Anaya November 10, 2023 at 6:27 PM Sometimes love is enough. Lovely flowing poetry Karen. Be safe xhugs Anaya Karen Jones November 11, 2023 at 1:04 AM Thanks and hugs Anaya.

Deb M November 7, 2023 at 12:50 PM Hi Karen….firstly just love the title….it drew me in and your poem did not disappoint….the colours, the love….just beautiful!! Debx Karen Jones November 7, 2023 at 12:57 PM Thanks Deb!

James Peranteau November 5, 2023 at 5:40 PM some one's infatuated in this write dear poet ;) Karen Jones November 6, 2023 at 4:56 AM Hugs James

Eve Roper November 4, 2023 at 10:40 PM Beautiful and warm feelings from your verse, Karen. I enjoyed reading my friend. Stay safe have a nice weekend. Karen Jones November 5, 2023 at 1:22 AM Thanks for reading and commenting Eve. Have a great week!

Bill Baker November 3, 2023 at 8:37 PM I like the imagery and all the colors of love in this poem, Karen. Thanks for sharing the experience of love, with us. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill Karen Jones November 4, 2023 at 12:47 AM Bill so glad you like it. Hugs and Blessings

Panagiota Romios November 3, 2023 at 6:36 PM This is so fantasriv, Jaten, awesome, Face! Pangie Panagiota Romios November 12, 2023 at 6:25 PM Oops, I see I spelled your name wrong,..great apologies, do forgive me, PLEASE..Perfectly OK to notify me in soup-mail, so I can make corrections. I am leaving the error there, so you can fee it, I also did not mean Face , I meant FAVE.. lastly fantastic was spelled wrong as well. I do not see that well Pangue…I do love this poem. Pangie xx Karen Jones November 4, 2023 at 12:47 AM Thanks Pangie! Hugs

Daisy Meadows November 3, 2023 at 11:41 AM A beautiful poem. Well done. Karen Jones November 3, 2023 at 4:59 PM Thank you so much Jeanette!

David Richmond November 2, 2023 at 8:16 AM This is a beautifully creative poem. It avoids the usual sentimentality that characterizes love poems but employs colorful images that effectively describe the experience of being in love. The "red times," "lime laughs," "lamenting lemon to maroon," "white stars," and "lovely lime lily pad." Excellent writing! Well done Karen. Karen Jones November 2, 2023 at 12:01 PM Your words are kind. Thanks for reading and visiting my page David!

Lynn D. November 2, 2023 at 5:19 AM Imaginative! IIntelligent! Nicely written! Good job! Karen Jones November 2, 2023 at 6:23 AM Thanks Lynn!

Mystic Rose Rose November 1, 2023 at 3:51 PM ah the title had me but the poem kept me, lol, I love your flourish verse thanks for sharing your heart dear Karen :) Karen Jones November 1, 2023 at 5:08 PM Thanks so much Mystic Rose Rose

Evelyn Judy Buehler November 1, 2023 at 12:02 PM Colorful and dreamy, romantic and fun. Much enjoyed, Karen. :) Karen Jones November 1, 2023 at 12:14 PM Glad you enjoyed it Evelyn! Thanks.

Judy Ball November 1, 2023 at 3:41 AM Too cute Karen. God Bless, JB Karen Jones November 1, 2023 at 5:20 AM Thanks Judy!

Gershon Wolf October 31, 2023 at 6:44 PM AA! for 'Absolutely Adorable,' Karen! Huzzah! Bring it on... Karen Jones October 31, 2023 at 7:20 PM Aw thanks Gershon!

Kim Rodrigues October 31, 2023 at 5:39 PM Very sweet, Karen! Karen Jones October 31, 2023 at 6:02 PM Aw thanks so much Kim!

The Situation October 31, 2023 at 11:07 AM I call it Muse Possesion. This piece is perfect from start to finish. Not only will I fave it. I'll have to study it. You made pieces fit and that's good. But the creativity was the pleasant surprise. Yes this is a fav. Karen Jones October 31, 2023 at 11:17 AM Wow. I am honored you think so much of this as to fav and say the kindest words. The Situation I am touched! Thanks

Andrea Dietrich October 31, 2023 at 9:57 AM so creative your use of colors for different ways your love makes you feel!! Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2023 at 6:58 PM No. They don't. Haha Karen Jones October 31, 2023 at 10:17 AM Andrea I figure everyone feels this right? Thanks for your kind words!

Jennifer Proxenos October 31, 2023 at 9:28 AM What a heartfelt poem Karen - your appealing wordplay indicates your talent. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Karen Jones October 31, 2023 at 10:16 AM I appreciate you comment Jennifer! Thanks for reading.

Victor Buhagiar October 31, 2023 at 9:19 AM Colours, songs and joyous times are all memories we won't forget. Lovely poem. Blessings. Karen Jones October 31, 2023 at 10:15 AM Victor memories keep me warm when the world can at times be cold. Blessings and thanks.

Sotto Poet October 31, 2023 at 6:29 AM Your eloquent and endearing expression of affection and how it nurtures our inner selves have been sincerely valued. We were captivated by the aesthetic appeal of your poem. Karen Jones October 31, 2023 at 10:14 AM You are kind Sotto! Thanks.

Yann Rolland October 30, 2023 at 8:25 PM delicate an charming déclaration, love take care of our souls, enjoyed your poem yann Karen Jones October 31, 2023 at 12:24 AM Thanks for reading Yann. Glad you enjoyed it!

Hilda Greenhough October 30, 2023 at 9:11 AM This is a beautiful poem. Good times are the best times. Karen Jones October 30, 2023 at 10:57 AM Thank you Hilda!

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