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Lily of the Fields


She is out in the meadow, 
with the sun in her face
There's a warm trace of velvet on white porcelain skin
She will steal away breath
if the eyes lay to rest
on sweet Lily, an ingénue', who lives on the lane
                           
I have watched her all day as she sways in the wind
without knowing what music, she hears from within
She basks in the light, and caress of the breeze
then, she bends to the earth, to drink in the scent

She'll rise once again, with a tear in her eye
and a beautiful grace, soft as clouds in the sky
Tall legs like a dancer, she may seem so composed
Who knows how she got here so far from her home

On her satin stemmed shoes, she will tip-toe, then twirl
arching backwards in time, in the white blossomed fields
Her voice is a whisper that quivers like spring

Spiral curls on her brow are like the swirls on a shell
Her honey is wild with a taste that is gold
There are bees on her dress, as she stands in the grass
She will dance in the sunlight, but is fragile as glass
Swaying 'round in wind with adagio's breath,

Yes, I've watched her before as the late evening came,
when she folded her arms, as a moth folds it's wings


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8/28/16
Contest: "And In Words She Blooms"
Sponsor : Casarah Nance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/15/2016 4:57:00 AM
"I have watched her all day as she sways in the wind, without knowing what music she hears from within".... what a lovely way of describing their movement :-)
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Date: 9/14/2016 4:05:00 PM
Your imagery in this beautiful, beautiful poem leaves me breathless Carrie! It is a top winner for me. Congratulations on your win! 7 ; )
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Date: 9/14/2016 1:11:00 PM
Carrie! this is beautiful and I said this before but the flow shows such grace (if that makes sense) wonderful imagery :)congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 9/14/2016 12:44:00 PM
An absolute gem of a poem Carrie congrats on your win:-) I personally would have placed this much higher:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/28/2016 4:52:00 PM
This is just beautiful poetry, Carrie. Brilliant!
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