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Lilly's Lullaby

She was always there with her big green eyes Looking up at me and into the skies. Her dreams were of birds and of prowling about. I tried keeping her in but she always got out. She would hide on the roof to hunt unwary prey then gift them to me in her honoring way. Sometimes I screamed loudly at the gifts that she offered centipedes, roaches and mice were some things she proffered. Praises were always followed by special kitty treats. While I pleaded with her to make no repeats. She always stood guard as if to give me protection and would curl up close to me to offer her affection. Oh Lilly, sweet Lilly please continue to purr and I will continue to stroke your soft fir. As her song would begin well, it made me cry. I’ll miss her every day until the day that I die. November 24, 2014

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 5/4/2015 6:03:00 PM

Powerful well constructed

John Fleming

Date: 4/3/2015 12:36:00 PM

There is an almost "indefinable" bond that can develop between animal and human. So very different from relationships that concern creatures of the same species...How very odd! I had a Jack Russel for sixteen years - he was almost human! At the point of his death, as i held him in my arms, i had a blinding and most disconcerting revelation - The dog understood me better than i understood him!! ...Who is the most intelligent species on the planet? I wonder...i wonder...i really do... :) john.

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/1/2015 1:41:00 AM

G'day Connie... Lovely tribute for one who never fails to give unconditional love. Regards - Lindsay

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 3/5/2015 2:35:00 AM

Thank you Lindsay. I appreciate your comment. Cheers, Connie

David Fisher

Date: 1/9/2015 3:03:00 PM

What a wonderful tribute to Lilly. When I read about her gifts to you I was amazed. Sounds like big bugs in the neighborhood?

Len Gasun

Date: 12/26/2014 3:14:00 AM

Hello my very dear friend Connie. So honored to read one of your amazing writes once again. Thank you so much. I'm also stopping by to greet you a very merry Christmas! I wish you and your family all the best on this season and the year to come! Sending my warm Christmas hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/15/2014 6:43:00 AM

Just beautifully written.

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/14/2014 5:32:00 PM

Oh Connie, this Ode, is so touching and beautiful, and makes me cry for my own sweet kitty. There is such comfort in the love of a pet, and it is such a huge loss when they leave. :)

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/14/2014 10:24:00 PM

Yes, I quite agree. I have Lilly's ashes in a special little can and I can't bear to bury them. Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I hope you have a lovely holiday!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2014 11:05:00 AM

thanks for seeing that video, Connie. It was so fun to make it. I felt that she should have put it underneath the same place where the Gangnam video on Youtube is. Then it could get more hits. Nobody listens to me!!!

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/13/2014 2:40:00 PM

Yes, I agree. Then more people would be curious and click on it. It was fun to watch. I faved your poem so I could watch it again.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/13/2014 10:01:00 AM

This is so touching! I enjoyed your tribute to your kitty.

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 12/11/2014 11:13:00 PM

Too sweet a Poem with a sweet tribute to your lovely little Cat Lilly dear friend. These beautiful animals always leave their sweet and selfless memories with us. Sad that you lost your Lilly. Love and best wishes always.....Ravindra K Kapoor

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/5/2014 1:42:00 AM

I have a Lilly, too! I know you miss her; cats are so endearing.

Funom Makama

Date: 12/3/2014 10:58:00 AM

This is a lovely piece and its a blessing to read it. Nice work.. Have a lovely week ahead

Daver Austin

Date: 12/1/2014 5:44:00 PM

OOOOOOWWWWWW, I love kitty poetry. This was great. Our cat Mamma Mia gets up on the roof, but then cannot get down, so we bring her in through the bathroom window. Love, daver

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 11/29/2014 11:41:00 PM

You have a way of carrying your reader along Connie,I am really touched with this one on your cat;congrats on the win ...huggs

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/14/2014 6:32:00 PM

Thank you very much KAOD5. I appreciate your sweet comment. Wishing you happy holidays! Hugs, Connie

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/29/2014 5:04:00 PM

A lovely poem for your cat. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/14/2014 6:31:00 PM

Thank you so much Joyce. Blessings for a lovely Holiday and New Year!

Jan Allison

Date: 11/29/2014 12:36:00 PM

such a touching poem Connie - many congrats on your win. Hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/13/2014 2:50:00 AM

Congrats on all your wins too Jan. You are having a banner year with poetry. Thanks so much for your sweet comment. hugs, Connie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/29/2014 11:43:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work..There are some very interesting stories in the winner's list..A fine group of poets gather at this soup pot..Sara

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/13/2014 2:48:00 AM

I agree with you Sara. Thanks so much for commenting. hugs, Connie

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 11/29/2014 10:50:00 AM

Dropping back with my congratulations for this beautiful poem Connie.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/13/2014 2:45:00 AM

Thank you very much Brenda. I am so behind in commenting. I don't know how everyone keeps up. Blessings, Connie

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 11/29/2014 7:13:00 AM

heart wrenching poem of love and devotion Connie I share your loss congrats on win and ty for your support hugs

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/13/2014 2:40:00 AM

Thank you so much for my placement in your contest Shadow. I appreciate it. Hugs, Connie

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2014 6:31:00 AM

Beautiful and touching write Connie...Congrats on your win

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/13/2014 1:49:00 AM

Thank you very much Joseph. I am off to see your latest!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/27/2014 12:12:00 PM

Dear Connie, How Lilly reminds me of my cats. They left all sorts of treasures (beheaded critters) at my door and wanted lap time even more than kitty treats. You brought back some wonderful memories, Hon. I think I'm ready to get another kitty now. (I've missed my last cat, Katy, for nearly five years. She was 22 when she died.) Happy Thanksgiving! I'd love to try to co-write with you some day. Your poetry has wonderful appeal to me. Love to my gifted friend, Carolyn

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/13/2014 1:31:00 AM

Oh, thank you so much for fav'ing this Carolyn.My aunt had a beloved cat for many years and when she was ill and had to go to the hospital her kitty died without her. She felt so bad that she wasn't there to comfort him, but a week later she passed on too and I love knowing her kitty was there to greet her. Thanks so much. Let's collaborate, it may take a little longer because my time on the net is limited taking care of my g.daughter but I am up for it. Blessings, Connie

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 11/27/2014 12:12:00 PM

A fave for me.

Len Gasun

Date: 11/26/2014 8:51:00 AM

Oh, this is a very lovely poem inspired by your most adorable and wonderful kitty pet my dear friend Connie. I'm lovingly cuddling this gem of yours. Thank you so much for sharing! Thank u so much as well for your precious time again reading my poem/s and your very encouraging comments. Have a great day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/13/2014 1:20:00 AM

Thank you Leonora. I enjoy reading every poem you post. Blessings and I hope you have a lovely holiday! Love, Connie

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2014 11:53:00 PM

Poignancy at its best, connie. I feel this way about CAllie Cat and my Ollyver. I had a Lilah, remember. Her name similar to this dear pet of yours! I always feel guilty for getting rid of that one but she was ruining our carpets so badly. I hope I don't go to hell for taking her to the pound.

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/13/2014 1:06:00 AM

Life can be hard when you have to give up a beloved pet. Thanks for commenting Andrea. hugs, Connie

Paul Callus

Date: 11/25/2014 4:38:00 PM

This is a lovely and touching poem, Connie. Pets are such good companions; we've always had cats in the family. The trouble is that when they pass away a big void is left. I always say "no more", but I can never say no to the next sweet kitten that comes my way! // paul

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/13/2014 12:58:00 AM

My daughter took her cat with her when she married so now our home is catless. I do miss the sweet purring songs and the cuddles. I am sure I will have another one day. Thank you for your lovely thoughtful comment Paul. Blessings, Connie

Monterey Sirak

Date: 11/25/2014 6:29:00 AM

I can feel the love you have for this beautiful cat in every line. As I write this, Fred, my tomcat is in my lap trying to tuck his head under my chin and pulling at my hair. Don't you feel like someone special when a cat loves you?

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/13/2014 12:33:00 AM

Yes, that feeling of love and warmth offers such serenity. Thank you Monterey. Blessings, Connie