Lilith

She’s a succulent succubus  
witch whom I can’t resist Her fervent pheromones. 
Her tenacious trance encapsulates me 
into Her wonderous whirlwind of pleasures. 
I’m hopelessly enraptured by Her. 
And with a whimsical wave of Her wand, 
She commands me with domineering diligence, 
“Behold lover, assume the proper position!” 
And immediately, I’m on all fours 
balking banally at Her luscious loins. 
My reverent refrain is in disdain. 
How can I contest this calamity? 
When I’m so adamantly adorned by Her approaching advances. 
I sorely succumb suddenly to trembling tremors. 
Epileptic ecstasy overcomes me! 
How can I refuse?  
I’m Hers, and She knows it! 

And my Penthouse pantry full of magazines 
rattle rhapsodies from my groin.

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Date: 9/13/2024 5:35:00 AM
Succulent poetry, Mr. Bentley. Succulent, Indeed!!! Do you speak of Adam? He seems like a very good man. But I am not sure he is over the first one! Isn’t he in the Penthouse right now?! Fiddling with his magazines? Always Reading. Always with his head in the clouds, full of fantasies! Waiting for Eve, I am sure. But he is clean! Washes his hands, three to four times a day! There are never enough towels in his pantry.
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Date: 5/30/2024 7:48:00 PM
watch out for the cat o' 9 tales...
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Date: 5/28/2024 12:59:00 PM
nothing quite like a rattling rhapsody ;)
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Date: 5/29/2024 6:09:00 AM
On all fours no less!
Date: 5/28/2024 9:26:00 AM
Perfect Alliterations. I appreciate. Have Good Days.
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