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Entry for the Lilith Poetry Contest, submitted May 25, 2024.

As a figure in history and legend, she is mythic but was regarded as parasitic and horrific. She was demonized and dehumanized; a woman so fiery, known for notoriety and impropriety; a mistress of seduction, corruption and obstruction, haughtiness and ungodliness. Banished for not obeying Adam, she embodied the fears of man: a symbol of emasculation, a primordial she-demon. There is another side to her story. Perhaps she deserves to be covered in glory. She was strong and independent and while facing resentment for not being subservient, she was unrepentant. For many women, she is transcendent; a figure so mythical for feminine strength, she is the pinnacle, her assertiveness: unequivocal. Her name means "belonging to the night", but she may be the brightest light because - her admirers make no apology - she represents equality.

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Date: 6/12/2024 12:56:00 PM
Your poem rhymes really well and you have included a lot of information about Lilith.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Jim Healey
Date: 6/12/2024 1:16:00 PM
Thank you very much. I appreciate it. Take care, Jim.
Date: 5/25/2024 4:28:00 PM
a stunning poem and contest entry, Jim. You've captured the essence of Lilith historically as well figuratively what she represents. You made her fascinating. Best wishes with the contest, enjoy your evening, Sara
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Jim Healey
Date: 5/25/2024 4:50:00 PM
Thank you, Sara. As always, your comments are most welcome. Thank you for your compliments and encouragement. Much appreciated. Your poet friend in Newfoundland, Jim.

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