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Lilith

My love life truly is humanities' first dumpster fire Not a wife to the chosen man; just dust from the same pan Never the true love of heavens disgraceful clipped sparrow A myth to those who think they've felt sufferage conspire The other women from times beginning; imagine if you can If someone; anyone, would have split that apple with an arrow Immortal our paring, eternal love designed to bloom but never tire But blind faith stepped in; to act out our benevolent sovereigns plan My immortality was sacrificed for so-called perfection based on one man's marrow By refusing to submit, his wrath named me "Lilith" to damnations' highest level for a woman, I would...... aspire

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Date: 6/12/2024 1:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 6/12/2024 2:54:00 PM
Thank you S.O.! I appreciate the opportunity to enter one of your contests! Regards A.S.
Date: 5/27/2024 6:21:00 PM
Whoa, this is intense...would be afraid to get on the wrong side of you, powerful writing, though
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Date: 5/27/2024 9:04:00 PM
A mythical righteousness follows this maiden. Seemed fitting to enter a contest with her as the theme. Though my expectations are about as rank and file as her appreciation. I am not as scary as I appear ;) Warmly A.S.

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