Lilac Feathered Goodbye

I hope you would still remember me as we were,

every time you see pristine 

passing pomegranate hues of the horizon.

When clouds smear our unspoken love 

in inexplicable figurines,

of those simple moments we 

reignited beneath our own twilight, 

reliving our dreams in 

remaining rosy dialects of romantic recollections,

as I have a confession to make

beneath this cluttering of chaos.

I wasn’t ready to let you nor our late night conversations go, 

After all these years, all my heart ever desires, 

is for you to see the broken empire 

behind these weary eyes.

I have long been a gift of solitude and sorrow,

But as I’ve let you go, my hopes swayed a lilac 

feathered goodbye,

Although you’ll never know how a simple hey, 

once upon a time, saved my life,

and embellished my universe with pearlescent 

moonstones and amethysts.

Yet I still question you, in rustic rhymes you can’t comprehend,

Have you forgotten how to pronounce my name?

is it because your heart doesn’t feel the same?

Have your desires now become tame?

As you walk away, why am I the one to take the blame?

Is our love now lost in history?

Is that why you’ve left me in so much mystery?

In your absence the mind battles against violence.

All is mute in a void of meaningless silence.

Did you forget to love me today?

Is this the price I have to pay?

Just for you to say that you’ll love me 

again in the same way, someday.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Downing  Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 6:15 PM
Gosh, this is just deeply heartfelt. And this line, “Did you forget to love me today?” Just let my hidden tears escape from their hidden ponds. Whoa! Inky, you’re simply amazing. I love it!
Empress Avatar
September 25, 2023 at 12:36 PM
Awwn thank you beautiful sweet soul. I appreciate u so very much
Lindley Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 12:52 PM
Such romance , a tragic love story. Your poetic words sing to this searching heart. Very fine the way you set this to be enjoyed. You are indeed a poet's poet. A fav my friend. God bless you. God bless you..
Empress Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 12:59 PM
Thank you so much for always being so kind and so supportive truly grateful always
Seeker Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 4:46 AM
delight of union followed by pang of separation, a longing, deep regret, a desperate cry to rekindle the magic of dying ember in its afterglow ~ ah but love employs no force and true love seeks no echo. enjoyed your deep, soulful write, IE, thanks for sharing
Empress Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 6:22 AM
Thank you for this beautiful comment and for your generous support always. Grateful for your poetic presence
Baker Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 4:47 PM
A tragic love story told through poetic genius. The curliest way to part is to part without knowing the reason why. The pain will last until it's mercifully let go. One has to accept, they'll never know. I've been there and done that. It's hell on earth. Thanks for sharing this heartfelt poetry with us Ink. Peace be with you, my friend. Bill
Empress Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 6:18 AM
Bill, you and Sara are the best! Cutest couple ever! Poets in love. Admire you both. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts. Truly grateful
Rose  Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 1:26 PM
Did you forget to love me today? how can true love ever forget its budding lilac, never, I feel your pain and loss my friend , beautiful to breaking point here. :)
Empress Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 5:53 AM
Thank you sweet rose, appreciate your support always
One Avatar
September 22, 2023 at 4:31 AM
Heart breaking goodbye.. So much emotion in your poem, which you are really good at creating. Did you forget to love me today? A great questions, sometimes we feel unloved, sometimes we are guilty of not loving someone enough.. Guess its all about finding the right balance... All is mute in a void of meaningless silence... yeah, such a tragedy of affairs that is.. relationships change over time, rarely do people stay together for a long time, but all goodbyes hurt in some way...
Empress Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 5:50 AM
Awwn thank you i hate goodbyes, and this was about an old experience and true love is sticking around despite how annoying i can be, poor whoever thats stuck wimme hey. Thank you for reading n for always supporting me in all the ways. Appreciate u silent one
Situation Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 6:44 PM
I would like to recieve these words just as a reminder.
Empress Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Awwn thanks
Edmonds  Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 6:14 PM
Beautiful yet so sad Ink, you describe the end of love so graciously. Love is never lost in history it’s kept in the heart under lock and key, forever in one’s memory… Belle
Empress Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Thank you so much beautiful belle i appreciate your support
Sands Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 10:16 AM
Beautifully written. So well expressed. I love this :)
Empress Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 5:25 AM
Thank you so much so glad you loved this. Appreciate your support
Dietrich Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 10:11 AM
Beautiful writing as always, Empress. Sadly, I think love's first passion can never remain the same, but I find it so sad that people just give up on lasting love anyway.
Empress Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 5:23 AM
Thank you so much for your kind and generous support, always grateful
Hind Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 10:05 AM
This is so beautiful. Your writing haunts me and brings tears.... I would be on my knees just to give you your pen! Don't ever stop...
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 10:28 AM
Awwn this made me smile! You are so cute! Thank you sweet soul. Appreciate you feeling me and im sorry for the tears… sigh
Dosanjh-Johal Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:39 AM
How deeply heartfelt, melancholic and beautiful. Love the imagery, the colours, and the artistry of your ink. You always amaze with your gorgeous art, matched only by your incredible heart. Grateful for you.
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:46 AM
Grateful for you too my warrior poetess appreciate you always
Kendrick Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 7:57 AM
Sad lines penned about love lost. People have to work at a relationship because each one either grows and changes or stays stagnant. It takes two people to make a go of any relationship. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Thank you so much sara appreciate your feedback and my pleasure
Scott Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 6:44 AM
Oh how my heart aches alongside yours.. "I have long been a gift of solitude and sorrow".. a deep well of emotion. Send the bucket down again will you? :)
Scott Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 10:52 AM
I revisited this.. yep.. still gets me :'/
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:28 AM
Hah sam thank you n sorry for the tears always appreciate readers like you
Pandit Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 5:55 AM
When clouds smear our unspoken love in inexplicable figurines, of those simple moments we reignited beneath our own twilight, reliving our dreams---Although you’ll never know how a simple hey, once upon a time, saved my life, and embellished my universe with pearlescent moonstones--how beautiful and charming--attired in voice of love. A FAVE for your jeweled vocabulary, Ink.
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Vijay i appreciate your poetic presence always thank u for the fave and your heartfelt thoughts truly grateful
Poet Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 4:42 AM
This piece of writing is deeply emotional and heartfelt, Ink. It acts as a glimmer of hope for those who have been wounded and hurt. The rhymes used here are exceptionally clever and evoke strong emotions. It is evident that this piece has been carefully crafted with great skill. It is an inspiring portrayal of a love that was almost lost, a topic that holds great significance to many other poets. You pose thought-provoking questions, yet it seems that no clear answer is provided.
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:27 AM
Awwn sotto u are so kind thank u so much for feeling me and for ur beautiful comment
Buhagiar Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 2:03 AM
An inspiring write on love almost lost, a subject so dear to other poets. You question but in reality no answer is forthcoming. A lovely poet.
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:26 AM
Thank you so much victor
Onpaper Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 1:54 AM
Mmmmm… the heaviness the memories the moments…. Mmmm papi … this piece holds power!!! From” I hope you would still remember me as we were” .. to “I wasn’t ready to let you nor our late night conversations go… “ hit soo close to home .. mmm how a simple hey save my life … mmmmm POWER!!! Aaah the ending .., mmm papi!!! I tell you now !! I love!! Again n again aeee .. artistry at its best..
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 10:27 AM
Li-ar lol hahah papi buh i still need u around lolol
Onpaper Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 10:19 AM
Aye aye aye papi… how come !!!! Lawyer ??? U want the lawyer while I am here!!!! Ayooooo
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:26 AM
Awwn papi i cant take u seriously lol sorry lawyer
Rhymes Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 1:46 AM
Deeply emotive … I have these questions too when it comes to love . Great one
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:26 AM
Oh awwn thank u aura
M  Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 1:28 AM
WOW IE ….thats a powerful moving poem! I can feel real honest sadness….Debx
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Awwn thank u yes it is.. u felt them. Appreciate u reading. Truly grateful
Sharma  Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 1:23 AM
This poem is so heartbreaking and it stirred such a melancholic symphony in my soul! So poignantly you've phrased those emotions of how one slight glimpse of the beloved could wash away the grief but now, longing is the only truth that breathes in the present.. Those ending lines just pierced my heart one by one.. Sigh, what a marvelous write dear Ink! Absolutely I'm in awe of your wordplay, alliteration, imageries and phenomenal descriptions.. "passing pomegranate hues" Your use of gems, lovely
Empress Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 9:25 AM
Awwn you are such a doll my angelic star thank u for not just readin but feeln me always grateful
Sharma  Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 1:25 AM
Moonstones and amethyst- ahh, they enchanted my heart, so whimsical! Although the emotions are sombre here, but your wordsmithery can make anyone's soul spellbound.. "In your absence the mind battles against violence" Very vulnerable.. Loved reading this, keep writing and inspiring!
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