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Like Watching Paint Dry

~ Layers upon layers, flaking residue... scraping at the inner walls of my heart, priming the ruins of my disassembled dreams while masking off all hope of bleeding out or bleeding on “Dare I bleed in the color of missing you?” Scratches filled in with crayon, vacant hues... only on or outside of the lines of love Woeful stick figures dancing to a lonely song, played by the empty roller lashed to my hand “Would you dare touch my hand prints....smear them?” Minutes take hours to pass, but who cares, Que Sera Sera... the old Zenith finds Doris Day happy, nice someone can be stirring a smile within a gallon of semi-(g)loss “Why are the sale brands always barren tones?” I cringe at the thought of another moment in this position, base boards... bent over and touching up, flat lining without an edge, waiting for your voice, your tinted smile...waiting your approval “Like watching paint dry...”

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Date: 9/19/2019 11:46:00 AM
What an outstanding poem!! So creative and I can relate to this completely. Well done Chris ! :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 12:35:00 PM
Thank you so much again my friend for all of the nice comments you leave on my work and for your friendship.
Date: 9/18/2019 11:30:00 PM
Some of those italicized lines made my heart skip a beat. Great metaphors used here. Painting baseboards gives one lots of time to ponder. Thankfully, for us, it worked out in our favor.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 7:44:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. The hidden metaphor here is I hate painting as much as I hate having my heart broken. : ) I appreciate your kind thoughts.
Date: 9/18/2019 6:58:00 PM
Well done and it's so easy to relate to the feelings in this write. There are many layers to that type of sorrow and you totally nailed the one you were inking. I love the depths in your metaphoric, italicized lines. You deliver, you deliver. Now, let's go downtown where all the lights are bright ... CayCay
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Chris Green
Date: 9/19/2019 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one. I always appreciate your visits.
Date: 9/18/2019 3:43:00 PM
Outstanding...My verses seem so small compared to your beauty..Sigh.It always feel good to be back..The paint didn't dry..Your poetic art is a living atom.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/18/2019 4:42:00 PM
Likewise good friend
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Chris Green
Date: 9/18/2019 4:32:00 PM
Your verses are never small in comparison to anything my friend. Thank you for your kindness. I sure have missed you.
Date: 9/18/2019 2:43:00 PM
i will never view paint drying in the same way again after reading this gorgeous verse...great metaphor throughout this whole piece and such soft tones, i couldn't quote just once section, this whole poem is well crafted my friend...excellent write! :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 9/18/2019 3:17:00 PM
Thank you Sandy. Now I am just trying to get the paint out of my hair, that is such a pain. : ) Seriously, I appreciate you and the smiles you leave on my poetry.
Date: 9/18/2019 2:17:00 PM
Wow again! You keep amazing me Chris! I love this! And the Que Sera Sera took me right back to Doris Day! But this whole thing just pulls at ones heart! Yea I guess waiting would be like waiting for paint to dry!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/18/2019 3:15:00 PM
I am glad you liked this one Brenda. Your wonderful comments are always a beautiful gift for me. I appreciate you.
Date: 9/18/2019 2:10:00 PM
This is quite good, l like your style. Thanks for your visit.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/18/2019 3:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Richard.

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