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Like the Beach Needs the Sand

Why do people walk away Am I so easy to leave Despite the effort and the love Too often, I grieve Do I do the same to others Have I done so in the past Is it just life’s complications Causing good things not to last Perhaps, there’s no awareness Communication nowhere found That’s caused this dark blue feeling I keep losing so much ground Insecurities take over Not knowing where I stand I know that I need people Like the beach needs the sand

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Silent One

Date: 9/23/2017 3:16:00 AM

Just returning to say congrats on potd

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/23/2017 7:00:00 AM

Thank you so much, I do appreciate it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/19/2017 7:53:00 PM

Great job, Mike and on getting POTD too!

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/19/2017 8:20:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/18/2017 9:27:00 PM

Congrats on POTD!

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/19/2017 7:58:00 AM

thanks Kim!

Dean Wood

Date: 9/18/2017 7:38:00 AM

A nice piece of introspection Mike. I have wondered the same thing with the same needs. Very well expressed. Thanks for sharing.

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2017 7:52:00 AM

Thanks so much, Dean

Maria Williams

Date: 9/18/2017 6:20:00 AM

Congrats on your POTD Mike - Your sentiments are so true for many and so well expressed. The accolade is very worthy of your talent and write. You have portrayed the nostalgic feelings of many and I guess when people don't return a friendship then one is justified in ignoring them. The last two lines are so true... Maria

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2017 7:21:00 AM

Thank you so much Maria!!

Indiana Shaw

Date: 9/18/2017 4:24:00 AM

Another beautiful verse from deep within the heart "Mike" and a very well deserved POTD - Loved the way you presented it - great form with very endearing last couple of last lines there - Congratulations - Indiana x x x

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2017 7:20:00 AM

Thank you so much, Indiana!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/18/2017 4:14:00 AM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d. Mike :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/18/2017 7:20:00 AM

Thank you Sunshine!

Charlie Smith

Date: 9/17/2017 9:57:00 PM

Congratulations Mike, worthy of POTD honors...

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 10:16:00 PM

Thank you, Charlie!

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 9/17/2017 9:37:00 PM

Great expression and meaning Mike! Congrats on POTD:-)

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 10:15:00 PM

Thanks so much, Keith

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/17/2017 6:48:00 PM

This is expressed so well Mike! Congratulations on your deserving POTD! : )

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 7:46:00 PM

Thank you so much Connie!

John Fleming

Date: 9/17/2017 4:28:00 PM

A worthy little poem, Mike...well deserving of a POTD -- nicely penned! My very best regards! :) john

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 4:39:00 PM

Thank you so much, John

Takaenda Danda

Date: 9/17/2017 3:08:00 PM

Nice Poem

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 4:28:00 PM

Thank you Takaenda

Jerry Bolton

Date: 9/17/2017 12:02:00 PM

Although for many year I made it very easy for people to turn away from me. i needed those people, but refused to admit. This poem seared my heart.

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 2:16:00 PM

Thank you so much for your honest comments, Jerry. Yes, I agree that we all need each other.

Eve Roper

Date: 9/17/2017 11:33:00 AM

Mike, congratulations on POTD

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 2:15:00 PM

Thank you Eve

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/17/2017 10:41:00 AM

Very honest on your part! Congratulations!

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 2:14:00 PM

Thanks Sunlite

Lin Lane

Date: 9/17/2017 9:10:00 AM

A wonderfully expressed poem, Mike. Sifting sand is easier than sifting through people who would be sincere in their friendship. Well done.

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 9:15:00 AM

Thanks so much, Lin xxoo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/17/2017 6:31:00 AM

Touching tender write Mike. Beatifully done. Congratulations on potd hugs mo :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 7:16:00 AM

Thanks Maureen

Jan Allison

Date: 9/17/2017 6:24:00 AM

A heartfelt write that many people can relate to but they find it hard to admit. Very well deserving of potd Mike :-) hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 7:16:00 AM

Thanks Jan xxoo

Darren White

Date: 9/17/2017 3:27:00 AM

Mike, great poem, so well written. So much sadness in there that I can fully understand...A worthy PotD :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 7:15:00 AM

Thanks so much Darren

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/16/2017 8:01:00 PM

A really beautiful and emotive write Mike. Your poem is genuine and sincere and vulnerable which makes it so endearing. I truly enjoyed your poem tonight! :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/17/2017 7:16:00 AM

Thank you Susan xxoo

Silent One

Date: 9/15/2017 3:21:00 PM

Great title, similar to my poem today.. We both wrote about loss.. Nice write Mike, great ending..

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/15/2017 3:40:00 PM

Thanks, Silent One

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/15/2017 1:30:00 PM

- Everyone needs attention and warmth (Communication) - As flowers need water - Lovely written with emotions, Mike - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/15/2017 3:08:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne-Lise, Happy Friday!!

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/15/2017 9:19:00 AM

What a great write this is. So well expressed Mike. I can relate to his. Yes, there is lack of awareness and communication that can happen. You have written this brilliantly. :)

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/15/2017 10:06:00 AM

Thanks so much Heidi, Happy Friday! xxxooo

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/15/2017 9:05:00 AM

Excellent write!

Mike Gentile
Date: 9/15/2017 10:06:00 AM

Thanks Kim, Happy Friday!