Like Eden
Like Eden
Wales to me begins with my first visit
to the great castle.
It was then that my appetite was whetted.
Positioned in the northeast corner,
a lookout, no longer strategic,
it rests perfectly in a place
ordained by the highest voice.
It’s sits atop this lush principality,
where tradition are revered and
tended to like Eden.
Modern and traditional, its people alone
decide in which villages time moves
and at what speed.
I can’t read the signs - the village name -
in which I’m told the dd sounds like th.
But I’m glad they don’t cater to
my American eyes.
It’s enough that they
depart their traditional tongue
to guide me.- in a heavy, appreciated accent.
I walk, just to immerse myself.
The twisting roads, the kneeling sheep,
the stone walls that have no beginning
or end.
The head shakes slowly for a lack of words.
If God told me to go somewhere and
wait for Him, I’d stay right here
in this northern village,
where already, I feel closer to Him.
Copyright © Jim Steele | Year Posted 2020
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