Notes About The Poem

Like clockwork

pull the veil separating day from night
and with a stroke of grace
beauty's canvas renewed
the cycle is immortalized
behold the rhythm of the universe



AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 6:47 PM
Very cool! Love the feel of this one! Can you imagine if we could do this?
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 9:12 PM
lol ~ it was fun to come across this picture
Baker Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 6:18 PM
So true, Line. Nice poetry, my friend. Bill
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 9:12 PM
Thank you very much, Bill ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 4:49 PM
this read a bit like a song...captivating words and imagery...had a soft feel to it.
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 5:06 PM
Thanks, Sara ~ much appreciated
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