LIKE CHILDs PLAY-Lune Haiku

like child’s play throwing up my arms leaves landing

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Date: 11/13/2023 11:32:00 PM
Welcome to Autumn! Memories play well against the gold and red background. :o)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2023 4:53:00 AM
Happy Autumn, Arlo! Thank you!
Date: 11/13/2023 6:27:00 PM
You've really nailed this one, Kim. I can just picture exactly what you've written. The imagery is perfect. Huzzah! ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 7:01:00 PM
Thanks so much…swoosh!
Date: 11/13/2023 4:45:00 PM
No greater joy than to act like a child long after the rush of youth has passed us by, nice one Kim, you bring me back to a simpler time of life, when throwing leaves in the air made my heart skip, :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 6:10:00 PM
We should enjoy those simple moments! God bless you, Rose!
Date: 11/13/2023 3:29:00 PM
This is so cute- I could envision it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:12:00 PM
Thank you, Paige! :)
Date: 11/13/2023 1:25:00 PM
Leaves are still fun to play in, Kim. Fun poem to read, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:12:00 PM
Thank you so much! And how fun that a friend’s daughter posted a picture of her son doing this after I wrote my poem :) Blessings!
Date: 11/13/2023 12:59:00 PM
You got it!!! and puddles to splash in...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:11:00 PM
Yes, John! Let’s:)
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