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LIKE CHILDs PLAY-Lune Haiku

like child’s play throwing up my arms leaves landing

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Arlo Parker

Date: 11/13/2023 11:32:00 PM

Welcome to Autumn! Memories play well against the gold and red background. :o)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2023 4:53:00 AM

Happy Autumn, Arlo! Thank you!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/13/2023 6:27:00 PM

You've really nailed this one, Kim. I can just picture exactly what you've written. The imagery is perfect. Huzzah! ~ Gershon

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 7:01:00 PM

Thanks so much…swoosh!

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 11/13/2023 4:45:00 PM

No greater joy than to act like a child long after the rush of youth has passed us by, nice one Kim, you bring me back to a simpler time of life, when throwing leaves in the air made my heart skip, :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 6:10:00 PM

We should enjoy those simple moments! God bless you, Rose!

Paige Hind

Date: 11/13/2023 3:29:00 PM

This is so cute- I could envision it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:12:00 PM

Thank you, Paige! :)

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/13/2023 2:54:00 PM

as I read this I imagined scooping up the leaves in our yard and tossing them into the air. Thank you for that delightful experience. Have a splendid evening, Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:12:00 PM

Yes, do! Live a little! ;) !

Bill Baker

Date: 11/13/2023 1:25:00 PM

Leaves are still fun to play in, Kim. Fun poem to read, my friend. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:12:00 PM

Thank you so much! And how fun that a friend’s daughter posted a picture of her son doing this after I wrote my poem :) Blessings!

John Lawless

Date: 11/13/2023 12:59:00 PM

You got it!!! and puddles to splash in...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:11:00 PM

Yes, John! Let’s:)