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Like Autumn's Leaves

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For JCB Brul's Autumn Reverie Poetry Contest

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be like autumn's leaves. . . brightly dying before crumbling into winter

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Hilo Poet

Date: 11/9/2023 8:14:00 AM

Several cultures host a celebratory atmosphere after ones passing, albeit the same is felt initially as fresh memories instills vividly--nicely done, Andrea. Aloha, William

John Lawless

Date: 11/8/2023 2:42:00 PM

would that we al could have such a vibrant passing Andrea. Beautifully written.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/8/2023 9:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A very colorful Monoku write/picture. Enjoy your day/win writing away........

Brian Sambourne

Date: 10/31/2023 9:50:00 AM

A true winner! The seasonal contrast is so sharply expressed. A superb Monoku. Be well. Brian

Sally Eslinger

Date: 10/29/2023 11:32:00 AM

Yes! Sad, but lovely monoku and so true IMHO …SOMEtimes i think the leaves are too wondrous not to know it…hmmm. Loved tgis Andrea!

Jay Narain

Date: 10/29/2023 11:21:00 AM

nice spiritual thought

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/29/2023 10:46:00 AM

Brilliant, as is typical from you. Much love and prayers, Gina

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/29/2023 9:43:00 AM

Perfect and needed. Dried leaves will kill bugs and turn themselves into soil. Blessings.

Jack Horne

Date: 10/29/2023 6:38:00 AM

yes, good advice for us all, my friend!

Silent One

Date: 10/29/2023 6:31:00 AM

Lovely one liner with autumnal imagery..

Karen Jones

Date: 10/29/2023 12:20:00 AM

Lovely

Ink Empress

Date: 10/28/2023 11:37:00 PM

How profound and deep can one monoku be? You’ve shown us all that with this monoku! Such an empowering one liner and i also love the wordplay here! Especially “ brightly dying before crumbling into winter” amazing!!!!! A fave for me this is! Impeccable

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 10/31/2023 10:58:00 AM

Thanks so much for that.