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Like a Victory

your chin trembles helplessly your thoughts are so far away from you you knit your fingers into one another each knot – like a victory your hands, embraced, run back into the folds of our common memories your body swans into the room your eyes are a blank page but your chin trembles helplessly it swans into our common memories – white feathers we puff them away like a victory against ourselves

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/6/2016 12:55:00 AM
SONIA, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT
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Date: 4/24/2016 10:03:00 AM
Sonia Coman, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv *LINDA*
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Date: 8/2/2011 1:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest Sonia. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/10/2011 12:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Sonia. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/13/2011 10:31:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sonia. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information about PoetrySoup. If you don't find what you are looking for ask any poet here. Everyone is willing to help. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/12/2011 9:08:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. check out the contest too and good luck...
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Date: 1/12/2011 4:02:00 AM
These lines are so sad. Stay well, Jancarl
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