Like a Vamp

I stand infront of a mirror...
Beholding my reflection in an hour..
As Slowly, I am amused to devour..
I notice changes more and more..

Have I grown old that fast?
Stressors and problems that pass
I sighted it's effects that may last..
I do not like to gush and rush..

For I want to enjoy in as much..
Tic tac! tic tac!, says the clock..
Don't get stuck, Don't get stuck..
Liking myself from a boulder or a rock..

Though a wind flows strongly aghast..
There's assurance it will not break or crack..
outside, I wanted to be like that..
yet inside, nothing but a soft firm lass..

Good or bad experiences, I have..
Not that I don't care as long as I'm love..
I don't want to rough but definitely tough..
Fearless yet Heart-full like a vamp..

(C) olIVE ELOISA
cONTEST: A POEM YOU HAVE NOT ENTERED #5
sPONSOR pOET DESTROYER
8TH PLACE
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Fraser Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 2:39 PM
Ooo to meet this Vamp. The Dark side has been underlying since 2013 - James :)
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
October 18, 2014 at 11:57 PM
ahahhahha :P :P :P no no no.. :)!!
A   Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 4:16 PM
I see what you are doing,, you are replying to all past comments... very XOOL... Linda
A. Sharma Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 6:46 AM
Beautiful write Olive ! U hv unique wonderful thots n a great pen ,,, so here sweetie for a win ! Congrats !
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 4:09 PM
Thank you dr. Upma.. :) your comments are very much welcomed. :)
Walker  Avatar
May 24, 2014 at 12:26 AM
Congrats on your win..hugs Verlena
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Thanks Verlena.. :)
Callus Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 10:55 AM
Congratulations Olive_eloi! A vamp!!! the secret is out...now I know what happens at night!:) Loved the poem and the thought behind it. // paul
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 4:08 PM
Thanks for the comments.. :D
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 4:07 PM
hahahah :D lools yees and ill gone sip and suck some bloods and brains.. ;loools esh hada... ?!!! id rather sleep and be a baby than ever be a vamp by looks.. :D
A   Avatar
May 23, 2014 at 10:25 AM
OLIVE, Congratulations, . I hope you don't mind your placement in my contest. Out of past experience, I know many don't like when I don't have a first or second placement. However, this is my judgment, and it only feels right, to place each poem, in the order I would have, as if there had been a first or second placement. Believe me, I'm not taking from you or your winning poem. Hugs, and enjoy my blog, "Conundrum" if you'd like. Have yourself a sweet day. ...always Linda
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
June 10, 2014 at 4:06 PM
I don't mind Linda.. :) Thanks mumumuuuch.. :) GBu
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