Like a Poem Is My Birthplace

Like a poem is my birthplace - so dear! The rhythm of it is the constant flow of the Mississippi, which is so near the town where I grew up. And row by row are stalks of corn leaning in fields of green. They are my homeland’s reason and its rhyme. A sight more beautiful I’ve never seen than verdant rolling hills of summertime. Roll on, dear hills, beneath a sun that beams. Roll on, mighty river, and fields of corn. Iowa, I picture you in my dreams, for far from you I live now and forlorn, Oh, your shining rainbows again to see! Iowa, my sonnet you’ll always be. May 29, 2023 for If Your Birthplace-Country Was A Poem Poetry Contest Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon
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Delaney Avatar
July 10, 2023 at 6:12 AM
Sounds so idyllic, Andrea We all need that promise of peace. Congrats on your top placement. SuZ
Mcintosh Avatar
July 9, 2023 at 5:21 AM
This is beautiful. I love it. Congrats on your top win. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
Roper Avatar
July 8, 2023 at 10:31 AM
Awe, a great write , congratulations on your 1st place win
Ray Choudhury Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 5:29 AM
A beautiful, charming sonnet, Dear Andrea! Isn't our birthplace the best in the world?!!!
Daniel Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 10:41 PM
Brilliant yearning and memories:)
Hawley Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 10:35 AM
Writing about my birth place would be hard as its 2 hours south of where I grew up at. You crushed this sonnet.
Peck Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 8:59 AM
a beautiful sonnet, Andrea. I think we yearn for the place where we grew and those days we spent in growing. Best of luck!
Y. Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 7:14 AM
WoW! Andrea, I can't figure out how to write a poem for the contest theme, you, on the other hand, did a great job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Kaufman Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 5:28 AM
This is very touching Andrea. I can empathize as I have been a transplant twice in later years from my native state of sixty years as well. Good luck in the contest.
Buhagiar Avatar
May 30, 2023 at 2:33 AM
One will always yearn for his birthplace, especially if it is a beautiful place.
Poet Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 6:16 PM
Andrea, it is truly enchanting to discover the genesis of your being in a splendid innovation and to fully understand that sentiment. Your longing for your place of birth is palpable. Good luck with the contest
Lindley Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 5:15 PM
My friend, such a wonderful new creation and know quite well that feeling. A fav. God bless
Lane Avatar
May 29, 2023 at 3:58 PM
It’s nice to read of your roots, Andrea. Sounds like your missing home.
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