Like a Folded Rose

I am incredibility inner today, like a folded rose, metaphorically speaking I am totally dwelling within . . . the world moving outside of me lost within my own reverie I have come to the art gallery where I can lose myself on the patio I am reading and writing the warm sun is caressing me the breeze stroking me silence embraces my body I am safe within my loneliness the world is far away until . . . some people arrive, noisily I leave this place and am now, lost within the world of old masters and I roam the corridors of the gallery a girl alone . . . and I dwell within like a folded rose ________________________ September 8, 2012 Poetry/Free Verse/Like A Folded Rose Copyright Protected, ID 09- 419-275-08 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France Written for the Standard Metaphorically Speaking Contest sponsor, Catie Lindsay, HM, Judged 09/24/2012 Submitted to the Standard contest, Late October sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged Third Place ________________________ Submitted to Standard Free Verse Contest sponsor, Skat, Judged First Place
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Inman Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 8:27 AM
Wow, BW.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 26, 2017 at 6:19 PM
Profoundly beautiful Constance! Congratulations on your win! : )
Smith Avatar
July 16, 2013 at 9:59 PM
Powerful. A well deserved will. Russell
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July 16, 2013 at 5:43 AM
great! congrats for the win
Mannan Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 10:47 PM
A very deep and beautiful write. Many congrats Constance.
Patnaik Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 8:14 PM
Dark imagery and amazing words. I read it many times to get a feel of this unique poem. I am submerged. Congratulations !
A   Avatar
July 15, 2013 at 7:47 PM
wow, an awesome win. always & forever *LINDA
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July 15, 2013 at 6:53 PM
Constance, this is deep, Love it. congratulations, glad you decided to enter this free verse in my contest. :-) love ~ SKAT~
Brown Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 5:13 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest Constance. Love, Carol
Gasun Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 8:32 AM
So beautiful!!! Congratulations on your win, Constance!!! hugs:)
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 8:56 PM
Beautifully written Constance. Congratulations on your HM. I can certainly relate to this one. I would think many poets will.
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September 24, 2012 at 8:06 PM
Constance, congrats on your Honorable Mention! Love, Kim
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September 24, 2012 at 10:10 AM
A beautiful poem. I am beginning to understand the metaphor better from reading yours.
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September 24, 2012 at 9:39 AM
Cnstnace :-). Congratulations with your awesome win in Catie's "Metaphorically Speaking" contest. Have yourself a nice day~ LUV*PD
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September 11, 2012 at 10:40 PM
an outstanding entry full of lovely connotations of metaphors Constance .. the rose parallel to u luv is so sweetly portrayed with beautiful essence of persona .. best wishes my friend luv
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September 9, 2012 at 8:59 AM
Just beautiful..BG
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September 8, 2012 at 4:00 PM
and i 'Metaphorically Speaking' love this awesome free verse, one get a sense of actually being there, when reading this,
Wellington Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 1:33 PM
An awesome write Constance...best wishes in the contest. One love. Joy Wells
Horne Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 1:17 PM
lovely write, Constance - so good to see you here : )
Sivey Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 1:06 PM
What a fabulous write my friend! I really enjoyed the creativity you exuded within this incredible poem! You have written a very delightful and a very special write Constance! I love this extraordinary piece, Great Work!!
Poet Avatar
September 8, 2012 at 11:37 AM
Amazing poetry by you Constance!Love this!
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September 8, 2012 at 11:27 AM
This rose requires little care today, beautifully written Constance! Luck in contest. Have a peaceful weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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