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Like a Dagger To the Heart

Joyful memories of days when we sang in the sun holding hands and kissing til' the moon slow rose oh how I miss your fancy face, your cute lil' nose after the laughter comes the pain, alongside rain I recall our promises tied to sturdy bits of twine giving me the strength to see life at its best oh how I loved you Guy but now, with deep unrest I long for the days when you and I met summer In your wild wild T, baby Suzy & Jimmy D dancing to Elvis hand in hand as we made love in the sand after the laughter comes the pain, alongside rain Playful as a summer day you knew I was yours eyes of glitter, lips of hot, hair of silky black oh my darlin' how you always had my back I long for the days when you said I love you First came kisses , then a love as right as rain, then came pain like a dagger to the heart, insane ! 8/8/2019

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Date: 8/25/2019 12:32:00 PM
longing for the I Love You days can be so hard, great poem sweet Pixie :)-luloo
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Date: 8/25/2019 10:10:00 AM
Memories of beautiful summer days and the distant echo of love...Very nicely penned Vie..Congrats on your win
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Date: 8/11/2019 3:22:00 PM
And I enjoy this summer reverie, golden and ephemeral as pixie dust.
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Date: 8/9/2019 4:59:00 PM
your tender heart will not be totally broken as you love life, dear vie... this is breathtaking...huggs
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Date: 8/9/2019 5:37:00 PM
Oh Nette, you know me so well, Hope your keeping good my friend, thanks for reading. xo
Date: 8/9/2019 8:07:00 AM
- True, Pixie - But, still many memories - Lovely written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/9/2019 5:37:00 PM
Thank God for the memories dear Sunshine, thanks for reading.
Date: 8/9/2019 7:33:00 AM
That ending line hurts..it was a great ride in joy and merriment till your poem takes a turn..but that is life..and you captured it well, Pixie.
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Date: 8/9/2019 5:37:00 PM
Dear Vij, all of life is a journey of pleasure and pain, we need to keep the faith, thanks for reading, have a great day.
Date: 8/8/2019 9:45:00 PM
I have noticed that pain often follows love. Fine poetry! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 8/9/2019 5:36:00 PM
So nice to hear from you again Mathew. Hope all is well, thanks for the comment.
Date: 8/8/2019 7:04:00 PM
All things must end. A sad part of life. But just around the corner..... rebirth. Have a great day.
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Date: 8/9/2019 5:36:00 PM
Thank you David, I do believe in rebirth, and yes its a great comfort. Have a great day
Date: 8/8/2019 7:02:00 PM
I like the added bit of nostalgia. It lent a nice feel to the piece.
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Date: 8/9/2019 5:35:00 PM
Thank you Richard, glad you liked it, Have a great day,

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