Like a Chrysalis

your silhouette lingers into a soft verse;
ebony etched ethereal aura engrained on age old canvas-
like a chrysalis your affection encompasses me in comfort
~safeguarded from fear forevermore~

for you shield me from persistent weathered seasons;
defend me against the lassitude of grievances i somehow call
forth when i am finally happy…

hands once ached, now solaced;
                tears once shed, now dried-
fear erased like a pencil's mishap,
                satchel of passion prevails...dignified

enchanted by epiphanies of alluring nights, 
where touch remains intimate; 
sheets of satin lining my curves-
eyes catch like the first and you whisper…
“i’m still so madly in love with you”-
you devour me whole - bad seeds and all;
                 (you always did see my scars as beautiful)

i am left unscathed in your arms
kept safe by love’s renown shield-
you are the magic holding the
heavens up in the sky...

thank God i am FOREVER yours


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Your Best Free Verse From 2019
Date - November 5, 2019
Sponsor - John Hamilton
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Watt Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Laura, your gift for translating personal and intimate feelings into lovely poetry is admirable... a talent you share with Jewel, whose poetry I have been reading recently. Your phrases are wonderful: lassitude of grievances, fear erased like a pencil's mishap, satchel of passion... loved your alliteration in line 2... your comfort verbs are in full force: lingers, encompasses, shields, defends, solaces. This is exquisite love poetry and I sending this to my FAVs. Be blessed, dear friend ~ John
Barden Avatar
January 7, 2020 at 10:11 PM
Blessings and congrats on your win in John's contest, Laura - keep on writing, my friend, and thank you for sharing. Blessings! :o) <3
Roper Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 3:47 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
Chiri Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 1:40 PM
Laura once again back to congratulate you on a top win with this beauty!;)
Hamilton Avatar
January 5, 2020 at 1:29 PM
This is magnificent writing Laura, congrats on a great win in my best of 2019 free verse contest!
Barden Avatar
December 17, 2019 at 5:35 AM
Best wishes and congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Lu Loo - keep the ink flowing, my friend! Blessings! :o)
Scars Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:36 AM
Blessings to you too! Be blessed dear friend x:-)-luloo
Na Avatar
December 16, 2019 at 2:57 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Laura
Scars Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:36 AM
thank you NA NA x:-)-luloo
Gauthier Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 6:36 AM
Lovely, Lu Loo. Congrats on your top win.
Scars Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:36 AM
thank you lovely Line - you are the sweetest, Happy New Year! x:-)-luloo
Andresen Avatar
November 13, 2019 at 4:49 AM
- Congratulations on your 1st place :) - Enjoy reading this beautiful poem, L.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Scars Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:35 AM
many thanks sweet Smile x:-)-luloo
Adams Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:18 PM
such a beautiful poem....congratulations on your win.... hugs
Scars Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:35 AM
thank you sweet Sandy - miss you! x:-)-luloo
Chiri Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 7:03 PM
Beautiful my dear friend! Congrats on your win!;)
Scars Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:35 AM
thank you sweet lady! Happy New Year x:-)-luloo
Gondolf Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 6:50 PM
Back to say congrats on your win sweet Luloo. Hugs, John
Scars Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:34 AM
many thanks dear John x:-)-luloo
May Avatar
November 12, 2019 at 6:46 PM
Congratulation on your Win! so well done Lu Loo you do amaze me!!
Scars Avatar
January 4, 2020 at 10:34 AM
aww thank you sweet Bobby x:-)-luloo
Gondolf Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 7:11 AM
What a beautiful love poem, Luloo, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John
Scars Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 9:53 AM
many thanks dear John, hope all is well x:)-luloo
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November 6, 2019 at 5:18 AM
Love this. You did it so beautifully. Sure it's a winner. Love to you dear friend ~ Gina
Scars Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 9:52 AM
thank you RR, love to you also! God bless x:)-luloo
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November 6, 2019 at 2:25 AM
A gorgeous write. "you devour me whole - bad seeds and all; (you always did see my scars as beautiful)" Wow!
Scars Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 9:52 AM
thank you- "BEAUTIFUL SCARS"... now you know where my penname came from on AP, it's because he sees all my flaws and painful marks as beautiful. Always has. He makes me feel beautiful even with messy hair and no makeup. After 23 years, the flame is still lit, thank you sweet Caren x:)-luloo
Green Avatar
November 5, 2019 at 3:43 PM
Beautifully crafted Luloo. This poem is drenched in love and desire. Best wishes in the contest.
Scars Avatar
November 6, 2019 at 9:50 AM
thank you sweet man- you are the best x:)-luloo
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