Lights Above Lake Superior

LIGHTS ABOVE LAKE SUPERIOR

moonrise
pours caramel
splashing across the lake,
reflecting aurora's pining
elope


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James Marshall Goff
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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July 31, 2012 at 11:40 PM
JAMES, stopping by to read a couple of poems. CONGRATULATIONS!! :-) with your featured poem of the week. Goodnight~ LUV~ PD
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July 31, 2012 at 2:10 PM
A perfectly painted canvas. Congrats on the selection. daver
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December 8, 2011 at 10:50 AM
A beautiful Cinquain sight you've painted here James. Congrats on your worthy three. Agape, Moses
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December 7, 2011 at 9:12 PM
Pretty picture. congratulations on your win. Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 5:36 PM
Cool picture painting, James!! loved the second line. Congrats on the win.
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December 7, 2011 at 2:24 PM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest James. Well done
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December 7, 2011 at 12:52 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Beautiful" contest Jimbo. Love, Carol
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December 7, 2011 at 12:34 PM
James congrats on your win..David
Freeman Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Congratulations James on your poem's honored place. Agape, Moses
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December 1, 2010 at 5:21 PM
Congratulations on your win in the big contest..Sara
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November 25, 2010 at 3:35 AM
James - Many congrats on winning coveted spot in Soup Contest..... Happy Thanksgiving.... Luv & Best wishes.....Hitendra Mehta
Richards Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 10:47 AM
Hooray for you James......among these prized poets....and so well deserved!! Congratulations!
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November 24, 2010 at 7:58 AM
Big congratulations on your win, Jimbo! Well deserved. Love, Carolyn
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November 23, 2010 at 6:09 PM
Wonderful picture you painted with this one. A big congratulations to you. Luv, Andrea
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November 23, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Dear James, My congratulations on your win in the PS Intl. Contest!! Always love your poems! Love, Audrey
Brown Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 10:40 AM
Congratulations on your win James in The PoetrySoup International Contest with your amazing poetry. Love, Carol
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November 23, 2010 at 7:32 AM
Congratulations, Jimbo, on your win in the International contest with this super poem.. Love Constance
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November 23, 2010 at 7:31 AM
Congrats on your big win Jim..Im happy for you...BG
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November 23, 2010 at 6:25 AM
Super congrats Jimbo on your big win in the P.S. contest on site with this brilliant entry my friend.. enjoy your special place of honor today and a very Happy Thanksgiving too..
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November 22, 2010 at 10:19 PM
Warmest congratulations, loved your poem it made for a great read, Anna-Marie.
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November 22, 2010 at 10:10 PM
Congrats for being among the winners, Cheers i take inspiration from you cheers suresh
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November 9, 2010 at 7:22 PM
Congrats on making it through the first round of the Soup contest with TWO poems, Jimbo! Love, Carolyn
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August 21, 2009 at 7:50 AM
What a view this puts into my mind! Thank you for taking me there!:)
Knox Avatar
August 20, 2009 at 5:47 PM
another beauty here .... awesome job :)
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August 20, 2009 at 2:38 PM
Love the descriptiveness. I really like line 2. Keep writing. Sara
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