John Hamilton Poet Etheree

Lightning Strikes Electrify a Kiss

Lightning strikes electrify a kiss




                                                       Light
                                                    Streaking
                                                 Across     the 
                                            Black    onyx     sky
                                          Image burned  in hearts
                                      And  vision  etched in  minds
                                   Moon beams brightly in dark night
                                 Splashing bliss  in  star  crossed  eyes
                              Lightning   strikes      electrify    a       kiss
                            Two   souls   ignite,  on  a  night   like       this  



Etheree Poem

Syllable count gradually increases one syllable each lines as follows
First Line 1, 2nd line2, ...3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10 
Total syllable count is 55


John Derek Hamilton
July 24,2016

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Alexis Y. January 24, 2017 at 6:45 PM Hi John, You've penned a good etheree. I found it to be romantic. It had lovely imagery as well. Congratulations on your placement in the "E" form contest: -) Alexis John Hamilton January 24, 2017 at 7:37 PM Thanks Alexis

Janis Medders Tobechi January 24, 2017 at 4:34 PM This is great John. Neatly done and flows smoothly. A 7. Congratulations John Hamilton January 24, 2017 at 7:37 PM Thanks Janis

Joanna Daniel July 29, 2016 at 1:18 AM Oh this is lovely!!! It would have won had you entered it in the contest:) John Hamilton July 29, 2016 at 10:34 AM I don't know about that, but thanks, I've changed it 3 times still not completely happy with it. Thanks for your constant support very much appreciated! JDH

Tom Quigley July 25, 2016 at 6:37 PM Lovely! Well done. John Hamilton July 25, 2016 at 8:29 PM Thanks Tom, they are a little restricting with syllable counts but I enjoy a challenge. Thanks again