Sara Kendrick Poet Sonnet

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Written after a very strong storm which was powered with wind, thunder, and lightning..

Sara

Lightning Flashed Heated Air

Lightning flashed heated air nitrogen bring
Desired raindrops free the earth from love's dust
Raining upon the dry earth unjust, just
It is only a very tiny thing

But when the clouds roll away birds will sing
On God the provider they place their trust
Even when man from his store throws small crust
Today the heavens with jubilation did ring

While the lightning flashed man did find rest
Tucked away in house, car, or barn over there
Out of sight where no one could see
In the hot argument of clouds man confessed

God I have sinned before you; please forgive me
Then be finished with this sordid affair

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Jack Horne August 8, 2011 at 11:52 AM Very expressve piece, my friend : )

Nette Onclaud August 8, 2011 at 2:28 AM a cool, refreshing offering with wonderful flow, sara.. i like! :) huggs, nette

Elizabeth Wesley August 7, 2011 at 10:32 PM Very nice Sara, Your descriptions give verse for the mind. Enjoyed so much.

Don Johnson August 7, 2011 at 8:07 PM Without a sin i can't confess, become a shiela wear a dress, nah thats not me, turn n flee hehe well done babe, xo, Don

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 7, 2011 at 3:50 PM Well Sara aptly penned my friend for this drought which needs much rain luv.. and God is an all providing God ..Jahovah Jirah .. and HE fashioned all .. an exquisite creative poem my friend..luv..

Russell Sivey August 7, 2011 at 3:48 PM Awesome write! Thanks for sharing! :)

Joseph Osita August 7, 2011 at 3:38 PM Well penned! Some lines here are just powerful.Sara, thanks for sharing

Cory Long August 7, 2011 at 3:31 PM this is beautifully written, I am glad I chose this one to read today cory

Steven Cooke August 7, 2011 at 3:16 PM i like this, love the line in the hot argument of clouds man confessed, classic writing. just beautiful