Lightness of Being

Life’s notes of simplicity 
flow soothingly in stillness
like a lone white swan 
swimming languidly
through silent ripples on a lake
in the early morn. 

How I long to flow along in 
nature’s pure tranquility 
cast off cluttered burdens
and fling life’s complexities 
to the farthest shores. 

To find freedom in space
brings serenity to the soul
peaceful presence of mind 
comfort, calmness and clarity. 

For when I cast off the
unnecessary baggage 
of life, I can relish in the
joy of the present
and live lavishly 
in lightness of being. 




Written on 12/16/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
January 10, 2019 at 11:19 PM
I love the spirit of your introspective poem, Laura, and the longing to find tranquility among life’s complexities.. living in the precious and present moment, casting off future and past worries, is indeed, a joy to be relished. A beautifully expressive poem that shines, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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January 11, 2019 at 5:22 AM
Thank you, Susan! Sorry glad you like this one! :)
Kiser Avatar
January 3, 2019 at 9:14 PM
Beautifully executed poem.
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January 4, 2019 at 9:41 AM
Thank you, M.L.!
Perna Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 6:17 PM
EXCELLENT DETAILS, MOVING, GREAT WORK!
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January 3, 2019 at 9:11 PM
Thank you, Diane! So happy you liked this! :)
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December 20, 2018 at 1:03 AM
A very beautiful poem. Reading it gives a good sense of peace and comfort. Regards Mpho Kgaswane.
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December 20, 2018 at 8:50 AM
Thank you, Mpho! So glad you liked my poem! :)
One Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 4:07 PM
Pure tranquility, sounds like bliss.... You expressed the emotions very poetically..
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December 16, 2018 at 4:32 PM
Thanks so much for commenting, Silent! I’m happy you liked this! :)
Wanter Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 2:01 PM
Just so enticing! Loved reading this.
Leiser Avatar
December 16, 2018 at 4:31 PM
Thank you, Sunlite! :)
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