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Lighthouse's Tower of Tusk

TOWER OF TUSK ‘ ‘’’ ‘’ ‘’ ‘ ‘ ‘’’ ‘ lone tower of tusk roaming beams of angel- light… signal post for ships rising obelisk pewter threads wave guardian’s blade… safe sail from dark harm ………………….. © copyright Russell Sivey’s Contest: In the Light of Haiku Written by: nette onclaud

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/14/2011 2:41:00 PM

interesting fantasmigorical write Congrad's light & love

Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/14/2011 7:13:00 AM

Very interesting piec, I like the idea of light as a blade cutting through the darkness.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/13/2011 4:34:00 PM

What an amazing piece you have writte here.. Congrats my dearpoet friend...luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/13/2011 11:59:00 AM

CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON THIRD PLACE WIN WITH THIS RARE BEAUTY POETRY SO SPECIAL ...OH ..A WOW WONDER ONCE AGAIN...

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/12/2011 6:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win...enjoyed! BG

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/12/2011 4:45:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest nette, beautiful use of vocabulary in this imagery-rich haiku...thank you for my placement in your cinquain contest and for your kind words :-)

David Williams

Date: 9/12/2011 3:57:00 PM

hey Nette congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/12/2011 3:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your 3rd Place win in Russell's "In the Light of Haiku"contest Nette. Love,Carol

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/12/2011 3:07:00 PM

Congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest "In the Light of Haiku"!!

Tim B

Date: 9/11/2011 8:34:00 PM

What an awesome piece of poetry this is nette, a magnificent description of silent guardians who shine light in the dark. A lighthouse, or just a person who hails the needy with open arms to come and be saved? Going into my favorites :)

Johnny Sumler

Date: 9/11/2011 5:09:00 AM

Excellent entry to an amazing title! Felt like I was on top of this tower of tusk! Short, descriptive, and atmospheric!

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/10/2011 4:08:00 PM

Enjoyed this piece Nette, wishing you the best of results in the contest..

Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 9/10/2011 3:02:00 PM

Been on a Haiku Kick of late here. Yourz is mighty fine. I DiGG ....

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 9/10/2011 7:28:00 AM

Love rising obelisk . . . this is sure to win, Nette, dear! Hugs, Cyndi

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2011 10:24:00 PM

A unique way to say ivory tower, Nette! Very descriptive!! Luv, Andrea

Margaret Foster

Date: 9/9/2011 9:45:00 PM

A perfect picture of a saving light. well written Nette. thank you for sponsoring your interesting contests. regards Marg.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/9/2011 7:28:00 PM

Reads like winning material to me..Very creative for sure..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..May your gift expand and spill onto the pages of soup..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/9/2011 7:12:00 PM

another magnifico piece in Haiku loveliness for the lighthouse Nette luv... good luck in the contest... oh.. changes evident on entry now luv.. good luck again..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/9/2011 5:48:00 PM

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Bl Devnath

Date: 9/9/2011 2:37:00 PM

Hi! friend, I think you are full of refine consciousness that your write depicts, nice, GOD always bless you. Thanks for sharing.bl

Kash Poet

Date: 9/9/2011 2:30:00 PM

Yes was waiting for this little gem from you...beautiful Haiku..best wishes...come.