Nette Onclaud Poet Haiku

Lighthouse's Tower of Tusk

TOWER OF TUSK
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lone tower of tusk
roaming  beams of angel- light…
signal post for ships


rising obelisk
pewter threads wave guardian’s blade…
safe sail from dark harm





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Russell Sivey’s Contest: In the Light of Haiku
Written by: nette onclaud

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Debbie Guzzi September 14, 2011 at 2:41 PM interesting fantasmigorical write Congrad's light & love

Nick Bagnall September 14, 2011 at 7:13 AM Very interesting piec, I like the idea of light as a blade cutting through the darkness.

Michael J. Falotico September 13, 2011 at 4:34 PM What an amazing piece you have writte here.. Congrats my dearpoet friend...luv Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 13, 2011 at 11:59 AM CONGRATS NETTE LUV ON THIRD PLACE WIN WITH THIS RARE BEAUTY POETRY SO SPECIAL ...OH ..A WOW WONDER ONCE AGAIN...

Barbara Gorelick September 12, 2011 at 6:37 PM Congrats on your win...enjoyed! BG

Charlotte Puddifoot September 12, 2011 at 4:45 PM congrats on your win in the contest nette, beautiful use of vocabulary in this imagery-rich haiku...thank you for my placement in your cinquain contest and for your kind words :-)

David Williams September 12, 2011 at 3:57 PM hey Nette congrats on your win..David

Carol Sunshine Brown September 12, 2011 at 3:34 PM Congratulations on your 3rd Place win in Russell's "In the Light of Haiku"contest Nette. Love,Carol

Russell Sivey September 12, 2011 at 3:07 PM Congrats on your 3rd place win in my contest "In the Light of Haiku"!!

Tim B September 11, 2011 at 8:34 PM What an awesome piece of poetry this is nette, a magnificent description of silent guardians who shine light in the dark. A lighthouse, or just a person who hails the needy with open arms to come and be saved? Going into my favorites :)

Johnny Sumler September 11, 2011 at 5:09 AM Excellent entry to an amazing title! Felt like I was on top of this tower of tusk! Short, descriptive, and atmospheric!

Joe Maverick September 10, 2011 at 4:08 PM Enjoyed this piece Nette, wishing you the best of results in the contest..

Jslambert Mister Roboto September 10, 2011 at 3:02 PM Been on a Haiku Kick of late here. Yourz is mighty fine. I DiGG ....

Cyndi Macmillan September 10, 2011 at 7:28 AM Love rising obelisk . . . this is sure to win, Nette, dear! Hugs, Cyndi

Andrea Dietrich September 9, 2011 at 10:24 PM A unique way to say ivory tower, Nette! Very descriptive!! Luv, Andrea

Margaret Foster September 9, 2011 at 9:45 PM A perfect picture of a saving light. well written Nette. thank you for sponsoring your interesting contests. regards Marg.

Sara Kendrick September 9, 2011 at 7:28 PM Reads like winning material to me..Very creative for sure..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..May your gift expand and spill onto the pages of soup..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 9, 2011 at 7:12 PM another magnifico piece in Haiku loveliness for the lighthouse Nette luv... good luck in the contest... oh.. changes evident on entry now luv.. good luck again..

Carol Sunshine Brown September 9, 2011 at 5:48 PM You Have Soupmail

Bl Devnath September 9, 2011 at 2:37 PM Hi! friend, I think you are full of refine consciousness that your write depicts, nice, GOD always bless you. Thanks for sharing.bl

Kash Poet September 9, 2011 at 2:30 PM Yes was waiting for this little gem from you...beautiful Haiku..best wishes...come.