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Lighthouse In the Storm

Plunged into darkness the coarsen tempest struck, 
Shattering the silence calm facade. 
Raging with passion reverberating laughter, 
The gales unrelenting moaning and thrashing 
Provoked and spawn inscrutable terror.

Hidden in the darkness by torrential rain
And shadows of the ardent temperament
vigorous gales and waves; 
The lone sentinel peered out enthralled.
It began to shudder and tremble
Uncontrollably, but unmoving 
Casting the gales a wicked smile
With its brilliant warning. 

Arching over with pleasured force, 
Winds raised the waves with a pounding rhythm, 
Embracing and probing
For entrance with explosive weight.

Unleashing its briny wrath,
The tempest amuses itself 
Toying upon the ships
With a deadly game of cat and mouse.

A calm comes over sooths the storm, whilst sunlight
Through a stain glassed window painting the rippling surface.

A final breath of woven weariness emerged from within.

7/17/2017

According to the Gospels:
He got up, rebuked the wind and said to the waves, "Quiet! Be still!" Then the wind died down and it was completely calm. He said to his disciples, "Why are you so afraid? Do you still have no faith?" They were terrified and asked each other, "Who is this? Even the wind and the waves obey him!"
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Ibeh Avatar
April 11, 2020 at 2:00 PM
Such a fabulous poem with striking imagery, Eve. Heartiest congratulations on your win!
Kauffman Avatar
April 11, 2020 at 1:41 PM
Powerful Eve - powerful words and images and wonderful personification "the tempest amuses itself." So many wonderful poetic elements in this poem. Congratulations on the winning placement! Many blessings for a Happy Easter my friend.
Gaul Avatar
April 11, 2020 at 12:05 PM
Eve, this torrent of literary lightening deftly displayed your acumen with imagery. You really let it all go here. Left nothing back in the quill. Terrific, passionate work. Most impressive.
Petersen Potter Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 5:00 PM
Very beautiful poem, Eve!:) Well written! And I love lighthouses so much, and they played such a huge and very important role in our past history. They sure were beacons of light in more than one way:) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)) D.
Roper Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 5:06 PM
Thank you, Dorian, yes more than one way Hugs ~*
Vaso Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 2:22 PM
I really enjoyed this, this is one your best poems Eve, so beautiful.
Roper Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 2:31 PM
Thank you so very much, Arthur, you really inspire me... ~*
Michaels Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 11:11 AM
Amazing piece, Eve. Truly a hard act to follow! Thanks for running the contest. All the best, John!
Roper Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 2:32 PM
Thank you so very much, John ~*
U.D Palawon  Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 2:01 PM
Such a passionate write...and lighthouse does evoke many emotions especially seen from the eyes of a seafarer. Enjoy this. :)
Roper Avatar
July 31, 2017 at 2:33 PM
Thank you so very much, Sunita ~*
Dutta Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 1:21 PM
Eve, Your poem is always enriched with excellence in expressive languages. i am great admirer of your poems. Love and Regards
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 3:26 PM
Thank you so very much, Anisha, for the most wonderful compliment anyone can give to another.... Hugs dear friend ~*
Sergi Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 5:52 PM
Eve , this poem was so beautiful to the point of being epic! My compliments!
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 3:27 PM
Thank you so very much, Ralph, for the compliment, I love the epic .... Hugs dear friend ~*
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 2:50 AM
I love that story in the Bible Eve. You did a tremendous job with your poem. The picture also inspires! : )
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Thank you so very much, Connie, for the compliment ... Hugs dear friend ~*
Nusker Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 12:04 AM
Such intense imagery, Eve. You have outdone yourself with this fantastic poem.
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 3:29 PM
Thank you so very much, Afzal, for the compliment ... Hugs dear friend ~*
Trifiatis Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 2:50 PM
Masterfully written with an admirable use of language dear, Eve! Much impressed my friend!
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 3:30 PM
Thank you so very much, Demetrios, for the compliment ... Hugs dear friend ~*
Onclaud Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 2:39 PM
how intense can this be and impressively crafted, eve... you win in your own challenge... huggs
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 3:30 PM
Thank you so very much, Nette, for the compliment you make me blush :) ... Hugs dear friend ~*
Onclaud Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 2:38 PM
how intense can this be and impressively crafted, eve... you win in your own challenge... huggs
La France Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 8:10 AM
Eve, this is a wonderfully penned Free Verse and a great example for your contest it truly shows the strength of the storm, well done, I agree this will be hard to beat.
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 3:31 PM
Thank you so very much, Broken Wings, for the compliment ... you always out do... and always enjoyed your writes...Hugs dear friend ~*
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 12:47 AM
Gosh, Eve, this is written with such passion and with so many powerful words, I don't know how anybody can do it better on that theme!! Will try to give it a go later on, but oh my gosh. I can't beat this one!!
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 3:33 PM
Thank you so very much, Andrea, for the compliment ..I have written so many poems on storms and lighthouses. you always out do... ...Hugs dear friend ~*
Wood Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 1:59 PM
Wow! In my dreams I might be able to come close to this. Wow!
Roper Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 2:14 PM
Dean, it is amazing that I have heard the same comment..., but when I have wrote up the past contest rules.... I am totally amazed at the work that I recieved and I feel my work is horrible. But thank you for the wonderful compliment...
Kiser Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 10:27 AM
Wow, beautiful imagery and flow in this one, Eve; a very pleasant read.
Roper Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Thank you, Kiser, ~*
Daniel Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 6:36 AM
This is amazing, Eve, awesome writing:)
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 3:34 PM
Thank you so very much, Jo, for the compliment Hugs dear friend ~*
Warrior Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 5:33 AM
You are a Lighthouse of the soup bowl Eve...Elegant and full of light...beautiful poem...^WW^
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 3:35 PM
Thank you so very much and bless you for the compliment you make me blush ,^WW^, Hugs dear friend ~*
Allison Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 2:51 AM
Powerfully penned Eve and I love the personification. I recently went to a talk on lighthouses on the Calf of Man - its a fascinating subject:-) hugs Jan xx
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 3:44 PM
Thank you so very much, Jan, for the compliment . Yes, the information on them are wonderful...Hugs dear friend ~*
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 10:02 PM
Powerful imagery in this poem. I really enjoyed it. A great challenge to an entry.
Roper Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 10:22 PM
Thank you so much for reading, Janis, I know you will come up with a great canvas in words.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 8:50 PM
Hello Eve,I love the lighthouses, I have seen many types of lighthouses and I like them all.They fascinate me I often wonder what it would be like to live in one. I enjoyed yuour poem.
Roper Avatar
July 17, 2017 at 10:25 PM
Thank you ,Darlene, as I have enjoyed a few too on the Oregon coast and have also oil painted a sense. Hugs
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