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Light Years From You



This is a space love poem — 
Romantic Warrior


Resting in a Zekar winter space harbor,
under the crimson crescent
of it’s fourth moon
So many light years
from your sky village
Oh, how I miss those rainbow waterfalls
Your Tamerian love is waiting ...
cascading from the crystal clouds
Being a deep space merchant,
on this galactic caravan,
takes me so very far from you
I send you my love, 
send it via 
a subspace hologram
Soon will fly thru the Vra nebula,
a dark forest of stars
Moving further away, I think of you often ... 
and those idyllic Pyrian days
I dream of you each night
on this long cosmic flight
And I need not ask,
do you dream of me too
This lonely Kryptonaut
is so many light years from you
This lonely half-human
can’t wait to get back to you
My shuttle craft love
is forever parked
in the cargo bay of your heart
With space business now complete,
you’re more than a holodeck need ...
so many light years to get back to you
Traveling now at maximum warp,
speeding back towards
the sun of you ... center of my gravity
Sending you my return love, 
sending it via 
a virtual message beamed back to you
My shuttle craft love
is waiting to dock
in the cargo bay of your heart
As I countdown the light years
bringing me closer
Closer to your beautiful soul
Now the light years are not as far away ...
my love, it’s approaching zero

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/25/2017 10:28:00 AM
Hi Freddie, this is an excellent piece of poetry, a love poem with such wonderful images. Your images float through my mind like a sattelite in space. A ;ot of thought has went into the composition and you deserve so many plaudits for this piece. Love it. Has to be a fave. Your Friend....Mike.
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Date: 8/25/2017 10:22:00 AM
Now that is what I call creative writing Freddie, Your travels through the galaxy is really captivating -" I dream of you each night on this long cosmic flight " Excellent poem, Well done - Mike
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Date: 8/25/2017 1:33:00 AM
A brilliant space travel Freddie. I really loved it....Maria xx
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Date: 8/24/2017 11:54:00 PM
Beautiful light years ... I love reading the poem and enjoying the flow along with the enjoyably floating images ... Thank you for your appreciation of my Lark Tanka ...
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Date: 8/24/2017 10:30:00 PM
Beautiful, Freddie. So full of emotion and love. It seems I am light years away from my love too. Bon voyage...
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Date: 8/24/2017 2:32:00 PM
Enjoyed your romantic space travel, Freddie. ~*
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Date: 8/24/2017 2:27:00 PM
Kryptonaut, I see by virtue of your origin , that you are also fiercely romantic over-comers. Enjoyed...g
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Date: 8/24/2017 11:34:00 AM
A delight, Freddie!
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Date: 8/24/2017 11:08:00 AM
Fabulous poem Freddie! Do you write stories too? I can bet you can write great short stories and/or novels.! Well done :)
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Date: 8/24/2017 10:32:00 AM
You're gone out of space... Nice... "speeding back towards the sun of you" is interesting...Enjoyed your space travel...Have a galactic day
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