Light Within the Dark

Blind within my dark, I've stumbled and I've faltered
confused and full of fear, not knowing what is real.
I've sinned and made mistakes, have fought my share of demons
I've prayed for death to come to end the way I feel.

Though I've known much pain and had my share of sorrows
and on my burdened soul lay sins that I contrive.
Still within the dark there is a light that shines there
and with His guiding light I know I will survive.

Through His word He's said that all the things I've come to
are the things that He has wanted me to know.
I pray to be forgiven, for strength and the endurance
to make it to the day His reasons He will show.

My soul is light and dark and it has many facets
has felt the Holy Spirit, has known both joy and love
but even when it's black it still does not know hatred
for this and so much more I'm blessed by God above.



Inspired by Michael Jordans Share Your Soul contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 3/27/2022 8:04:00 AM
A remarkable journey of faith and courage, graced by the touch of the Holy Spirit. It is darkest before dawn, hold on, hold on ~ Edit: Ah, I see this was penned in 2009, hope your energy body is vibrant and joyful now
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Date: 1/4/2009 12:27:00 PM
A heartfelt message of faith and determination. Well done Robin! Love, Keith
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Date: 1/3/2009 2:08:00 PM
Smile~"Yes You Are~Blessed That Is!"~I truly love the honesty & sincerety of "Your Beautiful Heart & Soul!"~It paints You so precious in Heavens Eyes actually! You remind me of King David, whom God loved so much, even amid all of his fleshes imperfections~we all have them dear lady, within this state that we are now in~but, as it says in I Corinthians 15~that will all change someday!~"My Love To You Always Beautiful & Robin, John!"~Bye Dear:)
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Date: 1/3/2009 2:56:00 AM
Yes! I hear you on this one, and know that light well. blessed are those who keep it no matter what - well done, love, Kristin
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Date: 1/2/2009 6:38:00 PM
Robin, you are such a dear and beautiful soul. A deeply heartfelt, moving and spiritual poem. Good luck in the contest! I am rooting for you in every way! Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 1/2/2009 6:18:00 PM
This is a definite contender. It's full of "soul" BG
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Date: 1/2/2009 2:04:00 PM
Great work Robin and good luck. I hope you have a blessed new year...Raul
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Date: 1/2/2009 11:30:00 AM
Beautifully done, Robin...you opened your heart like a prayer. A winner in more ways than one....beyond the contest! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/2/2009 10:44:00 AM
I have just recently found your words and the more I read the more i get intrigued..The voices in your poems are always so authentic, filled with power and desire for change and growth. I love this piece because it is very vulnerable...beautiful heart...reads like a winner. Much love, Chris.
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Date: 1/2/2009 10:39:00 AM
This is wonderful, Robin. The light of your soul shines brightly through your words, and your words shine brightly here at PS. Good luck in Michael's contest. Love, Nigel
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