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Light White Clouds

On summer grass freshly cut I lay relaxing looking up at the subtle slovenly shape shifter floating above It steals my mind and the world disappears slowly changing sneaking by forming frothy bubbles Candy floss fluff A carving of mashed potato Animals and faces high in the sky A shaping of marshmallow Pillows and cushions Cotton wool art A squirting of cream suspended in the air Buoyant bundles of sheep's wool and sculptured polystyrene Light airy sponge cake hovering high, hanging as I escape from my life to nature's creation in the sky Light white clouds

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Date: 7/26/2024 9:15:00 AM
I enjoyed this distraction Clive. I never say marshmallow correctly though and I always ponder whether I should start when I read it. Marsh mellow makes more sense... I don't feel like anyone is saying it right - I may do a survey :) nice poem
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Clive Culverhouse
Date: 7/26/2024 9:59:00 AM
Ha I know what you mean, also I don't think our friends from other countries call candy floss that either, but yes a little distraction from my back catalogue I forgot I wrote, thanks D

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